More for you people...?!
Question: More for you people!.!.!.!?
Sorry if i am annoying with this crap but i have to write, and i like opinions!. So read or don't!.
And now
as i'm sitting in a glowing darkness
i begin to wonder
if it was ever really worth it!.
Did i ever see it coming
or was i merely a victim
of an unjust fate!?
Or maybe i stayed for the let down!.
Maybe i thrived on the words that broke my heart!.
So kiss the wounds that made me shudder
the power of one
is the blood of another!.
I tell myself
that there's actually something worth waiting for!.
Telling myself im not going insane just yet!.
I need something to believe in!.
I need something to hold on to,
because i'm not ready to fall yet!.
But if you give me the word,
tell me its finally over,
i'll let go of my safety hold
and i will let myself fall!.
But i have a nagging feeling you won't be there to catch me!.
The images are still etched into my mind,
hazy images of what used to be
and i just don't think i'm as strong as you gave me credit for!.
ok i dont have a great ending for this one so just focus on what i did write and not what i didntWww@Enter-QA@Com
And now
as i'm sitting in a glowing darkness
i begin to wonder
if it was ever really worth it!.
Did i ever see it coming
or was i merely a victim
of an unjust fate!?
Or maybe i stayed for the let down!.
Maybe i thrived on the words that broke my heart!.
So kiss the wounds that made me shudder
the power of one
is the blood of another!.
I tell myself
that there's actually something worth waiting for!.
Telling myself im not going insane just yet!.
I need something to believe in!.
I need something to hold on to,
because i'm not ready to fall yet!.
But if you give me the word,
tell me its finally over,
i'll let go of my safety hold
and i will let myself fall!.
But i have a nagging feeling you won't be there to catch me!.
The images are still etched into my mind,
hazy images of what used to be
and i just don't think i'm as strong as you gave me credit for!.
ok i dont have a great ending for this one so just focus on what i did write and not what i didntWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
this is actually the first "writing"that i've ever read on answers all the way thru!. very good !.it kept me interested!.!.!.and the thing is !.!.!. i understood it!.!.!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
confusing,but very complex and deep!.very well written!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I don't understand, how can "average" people be so good at writing music!. I like the lyrics!. Deep, and it makes sense!.
Feel Great!.
Have Sex!.!.!. good sex!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Feel Great!.
Have Sex!.!.!. good sex!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Wow, Really Nice, Wish I Had Great Writing Ability Like You =/Www@Enter-QA@Com
I love it!!!!!. I almost failed English class so any poetry is great poetry in my eyesWww@Enter-QA@Com
That one is okay, but I didn't really like it!. I don't see any ways that you could improve it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Same as the other I loved it!. You did an amazing job!. You are really good!. :DWww@Enter-QA@Com