What do you think of this song i wrote (youtube)? Heres lyrics too, see what you!


Question: What do you think of this song i wrote (youtube)!? Heres lyrics too, see what you think!?
okay the recordings really bad cus it was on my terrible phone but try to look past it to see as a song really!. :)

Im aware of all your rules and
im aware you got no-one to fool babe
but yourself and thats alright by me
im aware of all your faith and
im aware you believe your made to
serve something that has no care for sheep

(chorus) be yourself till the end of the day
cus we're on our own till the stars they fade
you dont need them, to tell you who you are
the tide will change when the day it breaks
and the sun will fade, then the night will wake
for your sake, to tell you who you are

yeah im aware that we are the same
and i can tell that you wont forsake
your sacred path into punctured dreams

(chorus)

Lyrics arent quite finished

Heres the link http://uk!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=f886XS4ZAy!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
It actually sounds a lot like bob dylan!. A little too much,, i think!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.;)
Anywho, its a really good song and im not just saying that to get ten points!. Www@Enter-QA@Com

i like it your voice "kinda" reminds me of bob dylans ha but i like it record it and send it to me so i can have it please! :)Www@Enter-QA@Com

I love it it really suits your look it's a bit short maybe add a verse or two but it's a well done for me 9/10

Lol you lost a point for the camera:@ Jokes 10!.!.!. lolWww@Enter-QA@Com

That's really good, well done!

ps!. you actually look like your avatar, so do I!Www@Enter-QA@Com



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