Is my song any good? i need to know...i just had this song copyrighted, so if yo!


Question: Is my song any good!? i need to know!.!.!.i just had this song copyrighted, so if you steal it, i can sue!.!?
Song: Wait and break




Cold, Im awake but asleep
the thought of you scare’s me but calm’s me
I tell myself that I will be ok and the thoughts will fade
But they keep coming back to me

I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed

In my dream I see you and me, when I wake up I see you and him
And I don’t know what I can do
I tried to show you that I cared but you never saw until it was too late
The thought of failure continues to haunt me



I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed

It’s far too late for me now, you have moved on
The thought of me has faded from you
I try to lie to myself and think there is something there
But I realilize there is nothing no more

I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzedWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
It's good that you focus on the first person!. I don't see a distinct chorus, not that it needs one!. There's not much of a lyrical hook!. Usually the purpose of a lyric is to make the song memorable!. You have a good subject, but not much as far as song structure!. Take this from somebody who has tried to write lyrics but failed!. But what little I have written has verses, and chorus or an attempt at it!. I usually end up running out of verses!. I think coming up with a chorus first then writing verses is how most people do it!. But sometimes you can come up with what you think is a good chorus, or refrain (something that you can repeat in the song because it's good) that actually sucks, but you don't realise it!. So make sure that what you repeat is really good!.
It's difficult for me to hear the meter in the long verses!.
Sometimes short verses are easier to fit into a rhythm!.
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Nice lyrics !.!.!.!.!. and it won't be a good song till you put it to music !.!.!.!. but it has to be good music to be a good song !.!.!.!.!. Www@Enter-QA@Com

Yes is very good song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

i cant tell u becuz i cant hear it!.!.!.!.if u want people 2 give u real reviews then u hav 2 actually let us hear it so we kno if a word is a quarter note of half note or whole note ect!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

the lyrics r sweet !. It would be cool to listen to provided that the beat is goodWww@Enter-QA@Com

wow thats good you are awsome you def have a carrier in front of you good luck i hoped i helped make sure to make pichesWww@Enter-QA@Com

It sounds really good maybe blue october will get a hold of itWww@Enter-QA@Com

generic!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Without the music I can't tell!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

pretty good, could be longer though, what kind of beat is it!?
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its good(: Www@Enter-QA@Com

who would wanna steal thatWww@Enter-QA@Com

yea i love it!.!.!.!.its so my type!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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