Please rate my song lyrics!!?!

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btw im 13

The sky is darkening
the end is near
So much hate and sin
So much fear

It needs to be changed!.!.!.

So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.

Our world is closing in
if this doesnt change the world will come to an end
and there will be nuthin left
but an empty hole, in the universe!.!.!.

But then,
God might be able to start over
Try to prevent this fate
And save, the next, generation
From making our mistakes

So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.

But it doesnt have to be this way
It can be changed
It needs to be changed!.!.!.

So let the light shine throught the darkness
through the chaos in this world
Suicide, Murder
Why has it come to this!?
We need to be stopped!.!.!.
Even though there's already so much suffering
So much pain!.
So!. much!. pain!.
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