Be honest please just rate my lyrics?!
Question: Be honest please just rate my lyrics!?
You took credit, while you left us flat
You took the honor, while you left us mad
You took the applause, while you left us back
You took the positive reception, while you left us an unknown stat
Once you thought there was one to believe in
All you could see was a liar who felt like leavin
You, and your expected reaction
Of the cruel gestures you felt like flashin
This is to, the untrustful that left us flat
Who put us away like an unknown stat
This is a rhetorical dedication, we know right now you're suspicious
Of your guilty way of portraying the art of being malicious
I'm aborting this ellaboration, to you it's a degrading blow
Right now, you can see me as your private foe
The concealed truth unrevealed due to possible public hate
I still know your weakness cause I say it when I ellaborate
The doubtful expressions and gestures you said and regret
Only to know that it's like a lyrical unpaid debt
There's no way to deal a tradeback
This is the envious depiction of your unknown fact
This is to you who left us flat
You regret it but you told us enough
You think you can back in my face, like you're sho-nuff
But a victim can create your drawback
Just when you thought we didn't know smack
When you're lost in a guilty pool
You feel ashamed, like a regretful fool
No reason to hate, it's too late
Don't choke now, it's your turn to appreciate
My comeback, which will leave you in despair
Check the fact that your reaction, to me, I don't care
This is to you who left us flat
Who took the credit, while we were an unknown stat
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You took the honor, while you left us mad
You took the applause, while you left us back
You took the positive reception, while you left us an unknown stat
Once you thought there was one to believe in
All you could see was a liar who felt like leavin
You, and your expected reaction
Of the cruel gestures you felt like flashin
This is to, the untrustful that left us flat
Who put us away like an unknown stat
This is a rhetorical dedication, we know right now you're suspicious
Of your guilty way of portraying the art of being malicious
I'm aborting this ellaboration, to you it's a degrading blow
Right now, you can see me as your private foe
The concealed truth unrevealed due to possible public hate
I still know your weakness cause I say it when I ellaborate
The doubtful expressions and gestures you said and regret
Only to know that it's like a lyrical unpaid debt
There's no way to deal a tradeback
This is the envious depiction of your unknown fact
This is to you who left us flat
You regret it but you told us enough
You think you can back in my face, like you're sho-nuff
But a victim can create your drawback
Just when you thought we didn't know smack
When you're lost in a guilty pool
You feel ashamed, like a regretful fool
No reason to hate, it's too late
Don't choke now, it's your turn to appreciate
My comeback, which will leave you in despair
Check the fact that your reaction, to me, I don't care
This is to you who left us flat
Who took the credit, while we were an unknown stat
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Answers:
Pretty good, you need to record it and up load it so that we can listen to it on maybe youtube or myspace Www@Enter-QA@Com
8
but 4 the first line
switch
the 3rd line wit the second
You took credit, while you left us flat
You took the honor, while you left us mad
You took the applause, while you left us back
Www@Enter-QA@Com
but 4 the first line
switch
the 3rd line wit the second
You took credit, while you left us flat
You took the honor, while you left us mad
You took the applause, while you left us back
Www@Enter-QA@Com
off da chayn, homie!.
and wat u think bout deze lyrix:
biggie biggie biggie
cant u c!?
sumtymez yo p!.i!.m!.p!. wurdz iz b hympnotyzn me
n all da homies luv ma flashee wayz
datz y dey all broke but i so PAYYYYYDDDDDDDDDDDWww@Enter-QA@Com
and wat u think bout deze lyrix:
biggie biggie biggie
cant u c!?
sumtymez yo p!.i!.m!.p!. wurdz iz b hympnotyzn me
n all da homies luv ma flashee wayz
datz y dey all broke but i so PAYYYYYDDDDDDDDDDDWww@Enter-QA@Com
8/10
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9 need to work on the flowWww@Enter-QA@Com
Its good!. Do something with it!. Dont let your talent go to wasteWww@Enter-QA@Com
omg that's sooo good
10 =]]Www@Enter-QA@Com
10 =]]Www@Enter-QA@Com
Omg!.!.!.!.I freaken injoy it!.!.!.!.!.its flippen awesome!.!.!.!.I'm ur new fanWww@Enter-QA@Com
Not bad!. i give em a 7!.5 almost 8:)Www@Enter-QA@Com