My cousin wanted to know if these lyrics sound okay?!
Question: My cousin wanted to know if these lyrics sound okay!?
She wrote them herself!.
Love is the closest thing to magic,
and hate is a cold, dead rose!.
You and me would never work out,
because anger is a blood stained fist!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Love is the closest thing to magic,
and hate is a cold, dead rose!.
You and me would never work out,
because anger is a blood stained fist!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
i really like them!. Except the last line!.!.it doesn't go at all!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yeah I would find another way to describe anger!. Other than that its ok but in order to really give you advice I need a little more than that!. is the song about a boyfriend parents love in general!?!?!?!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
The lyrics do not appear to make any sense!.
I do not understand how anger being a "blood stained fist" would stop the couple from working out!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I do not understand how anger being a "blood stained fist" would stop the couple from working out!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i like em, especially the cold daed rose, but work on the blood stained fist part!.!.!.!.i wont steal anything!.!.i promiseWww@Enter-QA@Com
That's really good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i like them!! i swear i wont use themWww@Enter-QA@Com
is this ment to be free verse!? if so then theyre pretty good but the metaphors need just a little work!.Www@Enter-QA@Com