"Missing Child"-Work in Progress?!
Question: "Missing Child"-Work in Progress!?
Some lyrics at the end of the day, stopped writing to post em so its not too much to read!. Work in progress! Rate 1-10 and help me to improve it if you can!.
Missin child inside my heart,
its hard to look if you dont know where to start
Brain and body split apart stuck in a hazy dream
high school as a teen i was a one man team
two steps ahead yet three steps behind
shallow minds, build up to a high tide
Ignorance level rised washed away my peers minds
while my alias *Chuck Noland* spent days in caves writing lines,
i realized the only hope i had was time
but until the marked calendar day came my enemy WAS time
Fear and anxiety rose to the occasion
Constipated ambitions impatiently waitin
shocking statement is, i loved what i was facin
The struggle to reach that destination became a part of me
grew on me like an infectious disease,
infactuated in drugs sedating the beast
What i believed in turned against me
i became what i was sworn i woudlnt be
For the next 2 years i was walkin through a sand storm
what i seriously needed was a grand transform-
ation, but all i did was still sittin there waiting
Until i met the closest friend i ever had
Understood my problems, showed me i wasnt alone
interconnected me with people not through a phone
but with the concious struggle i never shown
*Chuck Noland*=Tom Hanks character name from movie cast awayWww@Enter-QA@Com
Missin child inside my heart,
its hard to look if you dont know where to start
Brain and body split apart stuck in a hazy dream
high school as a teen i was a one man team
two steps ahead yet three steps behind
shallow minds, build up to a high tide
Ignorance level rised washed away my peers minds
while my alias *Chuck Noland* spent days in caves writing lines,
i realized the only hope i had was time
but until the marked calendar day came my enemy WAS time
Fear and anxiety rose to the occasion
Constipated ambitions impatiently waitin
shocking statement is, i loved what i was facin
The struggle to reach that destination became a part of me
grew on me like an infectious disease,
infactuated in drugs sedating the beast
What i believed in turned against me
i became what i was sworn i woudlnt be
For the next 2 years i was walkin through a sand storm
what i seriously needed was a grand transform-
ation, but all i did was still sittin there waiting
Until i met the closest friend i ever had
Understood my problems, showed me i wasnt alone
interconnected me with people not through a phone
but with the concious struggle i never shown
*Chuck Noland*=Tom Hanks character name from movie cast awayWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
not my fav!. by you, but that = better than almost everyone else on here, not kidding when I say I truely enjoy your posts!. acutally besides me and sick as they are hated by all (he's got a diff name now) we're the only ones who really post lyrics!. I really liked it though, I'ma repost mine here that I wrote the other day so you can check it out, save you some time, and by the way I got the chuck noland line and loved it, briliant! we're gonna have to work together soon!!! 7!.5 but waiting for the final verison!.
look at me, so lost, a soul lost
bout to go off I'm screamin' "NO MAS"
my life's a tangled mess
wondering if my angel's left
thinkin my only angle left is death
a test, but no report cards
from the school of hard knocks I sport scars
can't pay court costs, so i never obsessed over sports cars
just weed in quart jars
and spitting flame, aim, at the moon and scorch stars
I torch bars, but all freestylin
equals, is me smilin', while fee's pilin'
up, stuck, trying to rise from bad habits
an d@mn addict, that attract static
family thinkin why ain't nobody killed-him-yet!?
wife thinkin I'm just a silhouette
used to feel a relief from the pills I'd get
sick as sh!t, done with the dirt
didn't want my son to hurt
look ma, your boy's reborn
for my former self, in joy we mourn :)
your prayers were answered
now, it's just this fu#king anxiety's made me scared of cancer
i just deal a day at a time
still I stay in my mind
sayin a rhyme, like I'm grateful
thankful, just hope my fam!. loves me hateful,(lol it's hard y'all)
see now, my dad's proud,
i'm not asking for a hand out
it's great, I'm here to raise my seed
create without blazin' weed
see you wouldn't believe the places I've seen and laid
and I'm still here with my demons slayed
Www@Enter-QA@Com
look at me, so lost, a soul lost
bout to go off I'm screamin' "NO MAS"
my life's a tangled mess
wondering if my angel's left
thinkin my only angle left is death
a test, but no report cards
from the school of hard knocks I sport scars
can't pay court costs, so i never obsessed over sports cars
just weed in quart jars
and spitting flame, aim, at the moon and scorch stars
I torch bars, but all freestylin
equals, is me smilin', while fee's pilin'
up, stuck, trying to rise from bad habits
an d@mn addict, that attract static
family thinkin why ain't nobody killed-him-yet!?
wife thinkin I'm just a silhouette
used to feel a relief from the pills I'd get
sick as sh!t, done with the dirt
didn't want my son to hurt
look ma, your boy's reborn
for my former self, in joy we mourn :)
your prayers were answered
now, it's just this fu#king anxiety's made me scared of cancer
i just deal a day at a time
still I stay in my mind
sayin a rhyme, like I'm grateful
thankful, just hope my fam!. loves me hateful,(lol it's hard y'all)
see now, my dad's proud,
i'm not asking for a hand out
it's great, I'm here to raise my seed
create without blazin' weed
see you wouldn't believe the places I've seen and laid
and I'm still here with my demons slayed
Www@Enter-QA@Com