This is my first song, so, is it good?!

Don't criticize me, this is the first song I've ever written, so it might not be good, can you please have an HONEST opinion, just not a HARSH opinion!? OK!. thanks!. :)

You & Me


Verse 1: You told me we weren’t gonna work out, but I’m not that full of doubt, you told me to get over you, but you’re the only thing on my mind, how can you be so blind!?

Chorus: No matter how hard we try, we both know there’s more than what already exists, so lets stop the denying and lets start trying!.

Verse 2: Try to be something great, I know that it’s in our fate, it’s not just you, it’s not just me!. It’s you and me why can’t you see!?

Chorus: No matter how hard we try, we both know there’s more than what already exists, so let’s stop the denying and let’s start trying!.

Verse 3: Who cares about them!? Why can’t it just be us!? I see the way you look at me!. I know you're not just tempting me!.

Chorus: No matter how hard we try, we both know there’s more than what already exists, so let’s stop the denying and let’s start trying!.
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