Thoughts on this lyric....?!


Question: Thoughts on this lyric!.!.!.!.!?
You've made away like a theif
Stealing every reason I had to believe
In something more than the lies you handed to me

I wrote them and I plan to use them in a song!. I want some honest opinions on them, though!. Thanx!.Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
slightly paradoxical, very poetic, and highly genuine

I dedicate these lyrics to one or two of my "friends" here on Yahoo!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

I like them!. But see, i think (depending on the genre) that if you were to use phrases or words that only you and your friends knew the meaning to, it would sound a lot more mysterious and be appealing to people!. Ex, "Elementary penguins singing hare krishna"!. John Lennon put in Elementary penguins to represent the naive-ness of belief in a single idol!.


If you were to do things like symbolize in your lyrics it may help out and make writing them easier!. (Im a songwriter/lyricist myslef)!. Good luck and i hope all works out!!!!! ;o)Www@Enter-QA@Com

Sounds awesome!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

They sound like something that Leona Lewis girl would sing!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

use it - it's awesome!Www@Enter-QA@Com

So far so good!.
It sounds pretty deep!.!.!.!.
I like it!Www@Enter-QA@Com



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