Rate my lyrics? is it worth it?!


Question: Rate my lyrics!? is it worth it!?
chorus-

is it worth it,doing time behind bar over gettin fast money,
is it worth it,doin all types of sh!.t to get my pockets chubby,//
is it worth it,nickle and dime'n it just to put that work in
is it worth it, is it worth it//

v1
money is on my mind, so now its time to figure out,
how im gunna do this and make it to a large amount//
how im gunna make it, the right way or the wrong,
selling blow in the streets or should i juss sell this song//
should i stand around and be a stick up kid,
or should i be a stockboy and lift boxes of sh!.t//
inside i have this ill hunger for green!.
now i thinking should i do it dirty or clean//
and now i got a lil brother so i should go clean
stop comin home high and do the right thing//
but the streets keep callin,waking me from my sleep
so i put my hand on my head like damn its time to think//

chorus-

is it worth it,doing time behind bar over gettin fast money,
is it worth it,doin all types of sh!.t to get my pockets chubby,//
is it worth it,nickle and dime'n it just to put that work in
is it worth it, is it worth it//

v2

times get hard,man it do be gettin tough,
hopin dat 1 day you'll be a diamond in the rough//
but at the same time
u thinkin bout fck dat,im bout hit da block and juss nickle and dime//
and why im still just wasting my time,
but a voice in me said "you do this you doing time//
so i bailed off,dropped the weight off ,
walked up the block and heard a car peel off//
it pulled up right next to me,
it was narcs lookin for dat extasy//
nothin on me, thanx to that voice !.
now im thinkin bout movin the weight,juss listen for a voice//
man im a risk taker
aint nothin stoppin me from gettin paper//
fast money
you no we gotta eat lovely//
but im still thinkin to myself
is it worth it for me to juss do this to myself!?//

chorus-

is it worth it,doing time behind bar over gettin fast money,
is it worth it,doin all types of sh!.t to get my pockets chubby,//
is it worth it,nickle and dime'n it just to put that work in
is it worth it, is it worth it//


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Answers:
Woww very nicely done tecloc sounds like you can get far in this industry if you just keep your head on right and things will happen I love the lyrics when are you going to record it!?!.!.when you do send it 2 me right away lol mwuahhhhzzWww@Enter-QA@Com

its like you were in my mind, the way i kindof pictured it with type of rock on music etc it sounds really awesome!. Nicely done!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

u r worthful 2 get 10/10
u were awesomeWww@Enter-QA@Com

pretty good work on verse 2 a little moreWww@Enter-QA@Com

its pretty brilliantly written i must say!.!.good job mate check mine though,i write and compose music fro my metal post punk rock band!.!.!.we're called Narrow Minded by the way check us out on myspace everyone!.!.!.
cheersWww@Enter-QA@Com

OMG!! i LOVE it!. jeez i cant wait until it becomes a song!. good luck with that!. seriously, life can sometimes be like that!. i hope you keep on writing, and when it becomes a song, itll be everywhere, and on everyones iPods! Definitely 110% 11/10!!Www@Enter-QA@Com



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