This is a new song my friend wrote. Do you like this song?!
Question: This is a new song my friend wrote!. Do you like this song!?
Okay so this is the third song my friend wrote!. I think its his best yet! What do you guys think!? We are also excepting tips if you have any!. Please leave an answer because they are all very appreciated! :)
also no chorus because it was not made to have one!. To hear the music that goes with it look up FL studio violin art!.
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Here are the lyrics:
___Even the world has hope___
Lookin back at memories, brothas drinken hennasy
Only one way to live bitches killen little kids
But what do we do we just watch and sing a song
and start to talk about what just went on!. Its
like we dont even care whats happening now!. People
screamin little girls bleeding wondering how!. I
never thought we would see a better place!. But
im right if we dont start change'n our place!.
Whats going on with the human race!? I dont know!.
Murderers, drug dealers, taking control!. Never
lookin back to see them screamin!. Only lookin
back to help them stealin, shooting n misleading
our people!. Corrupting our minds looking to take
over our lives!. No better place in mind!. Lookin
for crimes!. Only rhymes can explain this time!.
Nothing can change if we stay the same!. Nothing
can change if you always play the same game!. Only
the struggle will tear us apart!. Just make a
difference and you will have the heart to understand,
that even our world has a chance!. So get up help
another for a chance!. And remember theres always
a problem that no one can solve but if you try
more problems will be resolved!. So i'll keep singing
with this song!. We always got a chance just lookin
for the last glance of our world!. Hopeing this song
makes a difference in our world!. Looking through the eyes
of a little babies mind!. Penetrate the walls, knocking
bathroom down stalls saving the lives of innocent calls!.
Change our world one step at a time!. Everytime you see
something going wrong!. Think of this song and help that
innocents life from going gone!. Because if he died how do
you think his momma would survive!. Listening to this vibe
might save a life, if you know the problem and understand
the solution!. Nothing should stop your from producin
a conclusion!. Just have hope and you can do what im
doin!.
Good luck guys!. We can ALL make a difference!. Just gotta know you can!.
Www@Enter-QA@Com
also no chorus because it was not made to have one!. To hear the music that goes with it look up FL studio violin art!.
--------------------------------------!.!.!.
Here are the lyrics:
___Even the world has hope___
Lookin back at memories, brothas drinken hennasy
Only one way to live bitches killen little kids
But what do we do we just watch and sing a song
and start to talk about what just went on!. Its
like we dont even care whats happening now!. People
screamin little girls bleeding wondering how!. I
never thought we would see a better place!. But
im right if we dont start change'n our place!.
Whats going on with the human race!? I dont know!.
Murderers, drug dealers, taking control!. Never
lookin back to see them screamin!. Only lookin
back to help them stealin, shooting n misleading
our people!. Corrupting our minds looking to take
over our lives!. No better place in mind!. Lookin
for crimes!. Only rhymes can explain this time!.
Nothing can change if we stay the same!. Nothing
can change if you always play the same game!. Only
the struggle will tear us apart!. Just make a
difference and you will have the heart to understand,
that even our world has a chance!. So get up help
another for a chance!. And remember theres always
a problem that no one can solve but if you try
more problems will be resolved!. So i'll keep singing
with this song!. We always got a chance just lookin
for the last glance of our world!. Hopeing this song
makes a difference in our world!. Looking through the eyes
of a little babies mind!. Penetrate the walls, knocking
bathroom down stalls saving the lives of innocent calls!.
Change our world one step at a time!. Everytime you see
something going wrong!. Think of this song and help that
innocents life from going gone!. Because if he died how do
you think his momma would survive!. Listening to this vibe
might save a life, if you know the problem and understand
the solution!. Nothing should stop your from producin
a conclusion!. Just have hope and you can do what im
doin!.
Good luck guys!. We can ALL make a difference!. Just gotta know you can!.
Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
dude just admit that you wrote this song! but no reason to be ashamed, it 's pretty damn good!Www@Enter-QA@Com
wooow it's reallyyy good :|
it seems like it would make a good rap song
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it seems like it would make a good rap song
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I think it's pretty good, your friends really good at flowing through the words, it's sort of hard to explain!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it!
Reminds me of the The Script's 'We Cry'!
Your friend's got talent! Www@Enter-QA@Com
Reminds me of the The Script's 'We Cry'!
Your friend's got talent! Www@Enter-QA@Com
Nice flow! :)Www@Enter-QA@Com