What do you think about my rhyme?!


Question: What do you think about my rhyme!?
so i'm just sittin around and can't sleep and listening to dead prez way of life and i wanted to do something similar

what do you know about
the hustle the struggle
the grams the fam
the pain the scars
doin life behind bars
the lies the deception
the cocaine resurrection
the constant meditation
the self deprivation
the natural medication
the unconditional dedication


i'm not done yet but i want to know if i'm going in the right drerection and i dont have anybody around for some feed back so i'm asking for yours

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Answers:
It flows nice!.


Years of probation
Criminal relations
The instant sensation
Just to have it all taken
Now ties are braking
I feel butt naked
I Won't allow this
Not the last situation


yeah, that's all I got right now!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

i like it, nice choice of words!. only thing is if it was a full length song you might want verses with longer lines!. but its a good start keep making more manWww@Enter-QA@Com

spiffy!.!.!.!.
BUT ONLY if you can backup what your saying and you had better know about "the hustle the struggle!.!.!.ect" Otherwise your just frontinWww@Enter-QA@Com



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