How can I make good lyrics??? ?!
Question: How can I make good lyrics!?!?!? !?
OK, I know how to make lyrics but my lyrics is a little childish and I don't like it!. So how can I do better lyrics!!!!?!?!.!.!. I made like 20 songs and sound very stupid!!! Please give advice a lot!!!! ! Not rude comments about the song!!!! 10 points for the best answer and give lot of information about how I can do better song!!! Thanks!
I made this song but I think when I sing it, it sound terrible and I think the song is a little emo and bad!
Making me blind my many lights
Suffocating in a place full of darkness
I can't breathe
I can't die by making mistakes
Make mistake is horrible
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
8 in the morning crawling for some air
breathing with no heart
dying through sadness
Making me blind my many lights
Suffocating in a place full of darkness
I can't breathe
I can't die by making mistakes
Make mistake is horrible
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
So depress
wanna kill myself
heal me with your pride
hear my reason!.!.!.
Making me blind my many lights
Suffocating in a place full of darkness
I can't breathe
I can't die by making mistakes
Make mistake is horrible
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
Can you listen how she is suffocating in a place full of darkness!?
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I made this song but I think when I sing it, it sound terrible and I think the song is a little emo and bad!
Making me blind my many lights
Suffocating in a place full of darkness
I can't breathe
I can't die by making mistakes
Make mistake is horrible
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
8 in the morning crawling for some air
breathing with no heart
dying through sadness
Making me blind my many lights
Suffocating in a place full of darkness
I can't breathe
I can't die by making mistakes
Make mistake is horrible
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
So depress
wanna kill myself
heal me with your pride
hear my reason!.!.!.
Making me blind my many lights
Suffocating in a place full of darkness
I can't breathe
I can't die by making mistakes
Make mistake is horrible
Can you listen how she is suffocating!?
Can you listen how she is suffocating in a place full of darkness!?
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Answers:
yeah that's a little emo!. i think it has potential, but it is emo!. maybe it would sound better with a tune!. try not to make so depressing songs!. okay if you're gonna put a strong emotion like "kill myself" at least by the end of the song add some hope!!! Www@Enter-QA@Com
hey can i ask what country you're from!?
please don't say england or america because if you are from there then your literacy is terrible
brit xxWww@Enter-QA@Com
please don't say england or america because if you are from there then your literacy is terrible
brit xxWww@Enter-QA@Com