Comments on my new song...??!

Hey everyone, I just wrote a new song today! This is my very first song that I’ve ever written, so if it sounds really crappy, just let me know! I would really appreciate any feedback at all! ox


BREAK MY HEART

[VERSE 1]
I remember the time when I looked into your face
The dreams of our first kiss I still can taste
Then you started to drift away
But I didn’t know what to say

I remember the time when you told me that everything would be ok
That our love would never fade
But I knew right from the day
You never looked at me that way

[CHORUS]
Baby, why does our love have to end (have to end)
Can’t you see that you’re just all a mess (all a mess)
Now I’m shouting and screaming and screeching and shrieking
But you don’t even care how I feel anymore
All these tears that I shed you just kick out the door
You promised you would never, ever leave me in the dark
So why did you break my heart (oh oh oh)
Why did you break my heart (oh oh oh)

[VERSE 2]
Now I know I was misunderstood
Sharing thoughts with someone I never have should
I wish I could have stopped this from the start
Even though I never would

Now I see that this was a mistake
That we just started something that was fake
Something we did not create
Look how I was so misplaced

[BRIDGE]
When now my heart’s about to break
And all my love is turned to hate
All this hurt inside, my emotions hide
I wish you just could feel all this pain

I knew I should have stopped this from the start
But it was just too hardWww@Enter-QA@Com

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