Okay Gang: Any additions to these lyrics? ?!

These are some new lyrics I'm working on!. Any ideas/additions!?

You're telling me I'm no surprise
there are things I just can't hide
I'm just tryin' to live my life!.

Drifting litter on the tide
you can feel it all inside
when the storm out there subsides!.

Renewal never takes too long
when you're just a bon vivant
you're not tied to anyone!.

And if it's not what you would dream
don't fall down to bleed and freeze
say a prayer upon your knees


Does money captivate your soul/
do you want to feel control
have you sold you mother's gold

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