What do you think of this song please cheek it out ?!
Question: What do you think of this song please cheek it out !?
I'm always in the dark
Never in the light
Always in the background
Never having the chance to speak
Now it's time to say!.!.!.!.!.!.
I can feel hurt
I can feel the pain
I don't care what you say
Now I'm stepping out of the dark
And into the light
You see me as someone I'm not
You judge me by the outside
You don't know who I really em
I'm going to show this world that I'm human
I can feel hurt
I know what pain feels like
(course)
I had enough with being silent
Of being in the dark
I had enough with you
You think everything is about you
Well guess what its not
You might make me in the dark
But now its time speak the truth
I can feel hurt
I can feel hurt
I can feel hurt
Don't you understand
That you keep holding me back
From were I'm supposed to be
I can feel pain
I can feel hurt
I know what it is like to be tortured
You and your group can just live me alone
You can stop making me feel like someone I'm not
Cant you see I'm human
Cant you realize I'm not who you think I'm
I'm always in the dark
Never in the light
Always being last
Never saying what need to say
But know its time
To step out of the dark
And step into the light
But there is one thing holding me back
I Like to be invisible
I guess I lived with being in the dark
To long
(course)
To long
To long
I might be an outcast but thats ok with me
I 'll just be me
Since I don't really know
I don't know who I'm anymore
I don't know who I'm anymore
I don't know who I'm anymore
So I guess I'm fine with
With being in the dark
Not being in the light
I guess I'm fine with that
I might feel the hurt
I might feel the pain
But i guess I'm ok with that
Yea
YeaWww@Enter-QA@Com
Never in the light
Always in the background
Never having the chance to speak
Now it's time to say!.!.!.!.!.!.
I can feel hurt
I can feel the pain
I don't care what you say
Now I'm stepping out of the dark
And into the light
You see me as someone I'm not
You judge me by the outside
You don't know who I really em
I'm going to show this world that I'm human
I can feel hurt
I know what pain feels like
(course)
I had enough with being silent
Of being in the dark
I had enough with you
You think everything is about you
Well guess what its not
You might make me in the dark
But now its time speak the truth
I can feel hurt
I can feel hurt
I can feel hurt
Don't you understand
That you keep holding me back
From were I'm supposed to be
I can feel pain
I can feel hurt
I know what it is like to be tortured
You and your group can just live me alone
You can stop making me feel like someone I'm not
Cant you see I'm human
Cant you realize I'm not who you think I'm
I'm always in the dark
Never in the light
Always being last
Never saying what need to say
But know its time
To step out of the dark
And step into the light
But there is one thing holding me back
I Like to be invisible
I guess I lived with being in the dark
To long
(course)
To long
To long
I might be an outcast but thats ok with me
I 'll just be me
Since I don't really know
I don't know who I'm anymore
I don't know who I'm anymore
I don't know who I'm anymore
So I guess I'm fine with
With being in the dark
Not being in the light
I guess I'm fine with that
I might feel the hurt
I might feel the pain
But i guess I'm ok with that
Yea
YeaWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Holy sh*t i wrote a song almost exactly like this! thats freaky!. But yeah i think that is really good!. And i kinda understand where you are comni from and i can relate except with me i dont like bieng "in the dark" i wanna shine through!. But yeah thats a really good song!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
i like it!. did you write it!? i would be interested in hearing it performed like a video or something!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
dont change it i like itWww@Enter-QA@Com
That is fantastic!! I can't beleive you wrote that!
Good work =)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Good work =)Www@Enter-QA@Com
i like itWww@Enter-QA@Com
i really like it it reminds me of metro statIONWww@Enter-QA@Com
i think that it is pretty goodWww@Enter-QA@Com
no bad answers!? well uhh!.!.!. how are you going to improve if you dont get any critisism!? thats retarded hun!. you need some form of critisism to improve; so here it is!.!.!.
1) it was EXTREMLY repetitive
2!.) VERRRY boring (because of the repetitiveness)
3!.) nothing special; its not unique!.
4!.) there is like NO emotion in it!. which means that its not a good song; becuase the whole point of a song is to be telling somehting through emotion!.!. and you did not show anything like that because ALL you said was like dark and light dark and light
5!.) wayyyyy to original (which is also why its boring)
so yea, its not good!. SORRY, but if you want to improve you need critisism!. trust me!.
im juuust telling you the truth ! dont be a pu$$y about it and toughen upWww@Enter-QA@Com
1) it was EXTREMLY repetitive
2!.) VERRRY boring (because of the repetitiveness)
3!.) nothing special; its not unique!.
4!.) there is like NO emotion in it!. which means that its not a good song; becuase the whole point of a song is to be telling somehting through emotion!.!. and you did not show anything like that because ALL you said was like dark and light dark and light
5!.) wayyyyy to original (which is also why its boring)
so yea, its not good!. SORRY, but if you want to improve you need critisism!. trust me!.
im juuust telling you the truth ! dont be a pu$$y about it and toughen upWww@Enter-QA@Com