Lyricist/Songwriter looking for opinions?!
Question: Lyricist/Songwriter looking for opinions!?
I'd love to hear feedback of the latest song I wrote:
www!.myspace!.com/vincemirenzimusic
Thanks :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
www!.myspace!.com/vincemirenzimusic
Thanks :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
really cool! =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
Hey man, cool song!. Here is my thoughts !.!.!.no hard feelings!.!.!.
First off, try and pronounce your words a little better, i could barely understand what you were saying at the beggening of the song!.
On the parts that your voice goes really low, i think you have more potential to go higher on those notes!. So for example,for all the times you go really low in that song, try it with high notes!. It brings more feel to the song you are writing(your style)!.
Things I liked: The guitar progression! Choice of rhythm!. Choice of words!.
Good on ya!Www@Enter-QA@Com
First off, try and pronounce your words a little better, i could barely understand what you were saying at the beggening of the song!.
On the parts that your voice goes really low, i think you have more potential to go higher on those notes!. So for example,for all the times you go really low in that song, try it with high notes!. It brings more feel to the song you are writing(your style)!.
Things I liked: The guitar progression! Choice of rhythm!. Choice of words!.
Good on ya!Www@Enter-QA@Com
its nice, i like the guitar a lot!. i sing, write, and play guitar also!. :)
you have a nice voice alsoWww@Enter-QA@Com
you have a nice voice alsoWww@Enter-QA@Com