Are my song lyrics any good?!
Question: Are my song lyrics any good!?
ok so I'm 13 and my cousin is in the hospital i wrote this for him!.!.!.!.!.
the rain starts falling
i here you calling
and every things all right
so now you hold me tight
(pre-chorus)
tears begin to fall
as they wheel you down the hall
(chorus)
ooh oh
I'll miss you
now hears one last kiss from me to you
hmmm ooh
now your house is empty and closed
you wont be back again
(pre-chorus)
that night it rained again
that night i made a plan
(chorus)
I'll miss you
I'd die for you
tonight ill cry again
tonight i feel your pain!.!.!.!.
that's all i have so far but i felt terrible when i wrote it and i had to bare my soul,is it any good!?
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the rain starts falling
i here you calling
and every things all right
so now you hold me tight
(pre-chorus)
tears begin to fall
as they wheel you down the hall
(chorus)
ooh oh
I'll miss you
now hears one last kiss from me to you
hmmm ooh
now your house is empty and closed
you wont be back again
(pre-chorus)
that night it rained again
that night i made a plan
(chorus)
I'll miss you
I'd die for you
tonight ill cry again
tonight i feel your pain!.!.!.!.
that's all i have so far but i felt terrible when i wrote it and i had to bare my soul,is it any good!?
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Answers:
That's a wonderful song!.!.!. it's very sad, though!. Understandably!. :(
But it sounds like you really let your heart and soul out!.
And on top of that, each verse fits together perfectly!. Good job!.
I hope your cousin gets better!. I'll pray for him!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
But it sounds like you really let your heart and soul out!.
And on top of that, each verse fits together perfectly!. Good job!.
I hope your cousin gets better!. I'll pray for him!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'm 13 too and I kinda write songs too, Yeah it really does sound like a love song but It's really good! hope your cousin gets better!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
its pretty good but it kinda sounds like a love songWww@Enter-QA@Com
Its better than anything I plan to do!. The more lyrics you write the better you will get guaranteed!. Keep on keeping on!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
wow thats really good!!!
i think that you should add on to it because it is so good!. i bet ur cousen would really appereciate that!.
ur really good at song writing
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i think that you should add on to it because it is so good!. i bet ur cousen would really appereciate that!.
ur really good at song writing
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