I created lyrics for rock band like linkin park. rate it 1-10. thanks?!
Question: I created lyrics for rock band like linkin park!. rate it 1-10!. thanks!?
the song called my self!.
im going down the street and thinking about me!. (me self)
i try to reach the end but strange feelings hits me head!.
(my self)
i quickly turn around but theres nothing whos not aloud!.
(my self)
i try to disappear!.
(my self)
but someone just appeared!.
(my self)
so!!!!
--chorus--
(you try to throw my self along,
you try to keep my self alone,
you try to prove the fear in you,
and you still guess the fear aloooooud!!!!!!!)
so now i try to go along again but i stil dont know the end!.
(my self)
i want to reach the sky but something is not just right so!.
(my self)
and i try to keep it closed!.
(my self)
the fear got out!.
(my self)
i lost control!!
(my self!!)
so!!!!
--chorus--
(you try to throw my self along,
you try to keep my self alone,
you try to prove the fear in you,
and you still guess the fear aloooooud!!!!! noooooooo!)
(you try to throw my self along,
you try to keep my self alone,
you try to prove the fear in you,
and you still guess the fear aloud,
and you still guess the fear aloud,
and you-still-guess-the-fear-aloooooud!!!!!!!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
im going down the street and thinking about me!. (me self)
i try to reach the end but strange feelings hits me head!.
(my self)
i quickly turn around but theres nothing whos not aloud!.
(my self)
i try to disappear!.
(my self)
but someone just appeared!.
(my self)
so!!!!
--chorus--
(you try to throw my self along,
you try to keep my self alone,
you try to prove the fear in you,
and you still guess the fear aloooooud!!!!!!!)
so now i try to go along again but i stil dont know the end!.
(my self)
i want to reach the sky but something is not just right so!.
(my self)
and i try to keep it closed!.
(my self)
the fear got out!.
(my self)
i lost control!!
(my self!!)
so!!!!
--chorus--
(you try to throw my self along,
you try to keep my self alone,
you try to prove the fear in you,
and you still guess the fear aloooooud!!!!! noooooooo!)
(you try to throw my self along,
you try to keep my self alone,
you try to prove the fear in you,
and you still guess the fear aloud,
and you still guess the fear aloud,
and you-still-guess-the-fear-aloooooud!!!!!!!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I like it!. i'd like to hear the music too !. i give it a 9!.5 if you want a 10 i'd change the beginning (me self) to (my self) and hits me head!.
to hits my head otherwise its greatWww@Enter-QA@Com
to hits my head otherwise its greatWww@Enter-QA@Com
No way Linkin Parks song say "I, Me, Myself" alot more than that!.
Try adding alot more of that!.!.
Oh and I'm not hating on them for doing that I love Linkin Park, but its true!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Try adding alot more of that!.!.
Oh and I'm not hating on them for doing that I love Linkin Park, but its true!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's alright but I would try to make lyrics for a band that's not as good as linkin park!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
That's awesome!!
8, if not better!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
8, if not better!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Zzzzzz!.!.!.!. How amazingly cliched!. Its definitely like Linkin Park though!.!.!. so I give you a 3!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
its decent
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a *rock* band like linkin park!?
you've gotta be kidding me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
you've gotta be kidding me!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
hmm,well,kinda weird,but at least is better than jonas brothers!.!.!.5Www@Enter-QA@Com
i'll give it 9!.it's decent enough!.by the way who is iggy!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'd give it between a five and seven, not to be rude or anything the song itself is good, but the lyrics are sort of weak, It doesn't stand out or anything like that!. But that's just my opinion!.
I would recommend changing some of the words around, it's really hard to judge a song without hearing the actual music so i don't know what it's supposed to sound like!.
Something good to use when writing songs is either a thesaurus or a ryhming dictionary!.
The song is good though it's just not all the way thereWww@Enter-QA@Com
I would recommend changing some of the words around, it's really hard to judge a song without hearing the actual music so i don't know what it's supposed to sound like!.
Something good to use when writing songs is either a thesaurus or a ryhming dictionary!.
The song is good though it's just not all the way thereWww@Enter-QA@Com