I made my own raps heres one i did what do you think?!


Question: I made my own raps heres one i did what do you think!?
Okay you ready:
My name is yung
Seazar exact
The tighter the act
the more pay back
the more i get is nothing compared to the more i got
I hit the shot like im coby hit all net stoned on pot
No matter what i do i can't be stopped
No matter what i do i can't be popped
Imma iron ballon time for yall to be shopped
Cuz imma a picture and im worth a thousand words
Greter then diamonds and Girls haha
Beast in disquise you can tell by the light in my eyes
I hate to say it but this game was useless and i played it
And when it comes to the things ive done
ive done everthing from day one
no matter what it was or what it is
I get it
and a ticket
See im under arrest for being the best
Apparatley it wasn't just a felony
It was Miss Demeaner
I know you think about me now then at dinner
Just as long as you remember im coming home again
So i jumped in the sky to survive
but i got caught up in the eagles eye
both wings shot so now i can't fly
No matter what i do just a waste of time to try
But then came along an old homie a friend
He say u gon get stronger and then we'll start flying again
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Answers:
You got skillz!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. the more raps you do tha better you get!. You have your own style, tha last 6 lines were dope!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

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