CHECK THESE OUT? could these lyrics turn into a song?!
Question: CHECK THESE OUT!? could these lyrics turn into a song!?
First VERSE
In a year, its come down to this!. this lovely day!.!.
unable to be taken from me; locked and sealed
I say!. But the thoughts all race back and they
make me feel blue!. So I pray for the love that was
once you and me and I hope that someday it
will all come to be!.
Second verse
All I want to do is write and sing a song!. please
try to hear it, its all from my heart, can't seem to
bear it before you depart!.!.You try to make it so it
can't be done but it won't go away so take my hand
and stay!.
Bridge
I get up, get up, get up trying not to imagine what has
happened!. You beginning to be real shallow seems like
its started to get right back and shoot me in the neck!.
CHORUS
So I get up, get up, get up and write about you!. Everyday
I'd be woken up from the feelings that are still there!. Can't
sleep, tossing and turning!. Caring about you, don't dare!.
I truly can't tame the feelings that came about into my dreams
which I swear, I can't lie, it's all true and all about you!.
Third Verse
Don't get me wrong!. understanding!. we are all not meant to
be judged from the past song!. Looking at the skies above us!.
sit down and beyond daydreams in your head!. into the future,
head over heels don't get ahead and believe our friendship can
turnout dead!.
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In a year, its come down to this!. this lovely day!.!.
unable to be taken from me; locked and sealed
I say!. But the thoughts all race back and they
make me feel blue!. So I pray for the love that was
once you and me and I hope that someday it
will all come to be!.
Second verse
All I want to do is write and sing a song!. please
try to hear it, its all from my heart, can't seem to
bear it before you depart!.!.You try to make it so it
can't be done but it won't go away so take my hand
and stay!.
Bridge
I get up, get up, get up trying not to imagine what has
happened!. You beginning to be real shallow seems like
its started to get right back and shoot me in the neck!.
CHORUS
So I get up, get up, get up and write about you!. Everyday
I'd be woken up from the feelings that are still there!. Can't
sleep, tossing and turning!. Caring about you, don't dare!.
I truly can't tame the feelings that came about into my dreams
which I swear, I can't lie, it's all true and all about you!.
Third Verse
Don't get me wrong!. understanding!. we are all not meant to
be judged from the past song!. Looking at the skies above us!.
sit down and beyond daydreams in your head!. into the future,
head over heels don't get ahead and believe our friendship can
turnout dead!.
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Answers:
i love them they are awesome and well i dont see anything wrong but i mean you might just try to fiddle with the lyrics some it could be a really good song! i like them thoughWww@Enter-QA@Com
There good enough, there are so many bands that have horrible lyrics, it proves that almost anything can turn into a song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
these suck!!!!!! you are the worst song writer ever!!! you ******* *****!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Idk but play around with the music and speed and it might turn out really good!
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I belive you have the ability to be good yes!.
The problem with these lyrics is that it seems to lack catchyness!. It needs to either ryhme or show alot of emotion which people can relate to and it needs to be clear about what the subject is!. When you try to rhyme it doesnt seem to fit and it sounds awakward, like a forced rhyme!. And he lyric doesnt really have a good flow!.
But keep trying and it will turn out amazing! =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
The problem with these lyrics is that it seems to lack catchyness!. It needs to either ryhme or show alot of emotion which people can relate to and it needs to be clear about what the subject is!. When you try to rhyme it doesnt seem to fit and it sounds awakward, like a forced rhyme!. And he lyric doesnt really have a good flow!.
But keep trying and it will turn out amazing! =]Www@Enter-QA@Com