Do you like the song that i wrote?!
Question: Do you like the song that i wrote!?
Is this a good song!?
I wrote it please tell me if it is good
it is called Run For It
"Last night i was driving past the cops, and i started to slow down, But then i got this thrill in my head and i decided to run for it!!!!i was drivin faster then beforeeeeee but then cops lights started flash thats when i went fasterrrrrrrr, i was driving down the highway looking for someway out, then i suddenly saw my life flash before my eyes!!!!.
" Then i suddenly turned a quick left!.!.!.!.!.:"Then then then!!The cops were gone Then then then I made a run for it again!!!!!!My gas was running low! and my car was going slowwww, But then i stepped on the gas and i made a blast!!!Then i arrrived home and i decided i should make a run for it again!!!!!!!! Do you like it!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
I wrote it please tell me if it is good
it is called Run For It
"Last night i was driving past the cops, and i started to slow down, But then i got this thrill in my head and i decided to run for it!!!!i was drivin faster then beforeeeeee but then cops lights started flash thats when i went fasterrrrrrrr, i was driving down the highway looking for someway out, then i suddenly saw my life flash before my eyes!!!!.
" Then i suddenly turned a quick left!.!.!.!.!.:"Then then then!!The cops were gone Then then then I made a run for it again!!!!!!My gas was running low! and my car was going slowwww, But then i stepped on the gas and i made a blast!!!Then i arrrived home and i decided i should make a run for it again!!!!!!!! Do you like it!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
its realy good i write songs to so if you need more help writting a song email me and you no my email
also here is a great website that can give you an idea for your next song http://www!.lyricideas!.com/index!.html hope i helped
-Music Queen- :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
also here is a great website that can give you an idea for your next song http://www!.lyricideas!.com/index!.html hope i helped
-Music Queen- :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
it sounds country hehehhee
if you like country music it's good
but what someone already said in here is that your "song" sounds like a story and it lacks poetry a little, try composing songs on the guitar first and then adapt the lyrics to it, this makes it easier!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
if you like country music it's good
but what someone already said in here is that your "song" sounds like a story and it lacks poetry a little, try composing songs on the guitar first and then adapt the lyrics to it, this makes it easier!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It really doesn't sound like a song at all, like the first person said!. Write it in Poem or Song format first!. Then it'll be easier to judge!. And use only one ! and don't use the same letter over like on faster!. It makes you look more professional!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i would like it more if you sang it and I knew the tune!.!.!.but it's cool!. make a youtube video of it and send me the URL!. =D
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i think its a pretty good attempt!.!.!.!.!.but i dont think this song is too good in my opinion!.!.sorry!.!.!.maybe i need to hear u sing it!.!.coz just reading it doesnt leave too much of an impression on meWww@Enter-QA@Com
honestly, this does not sound like a song at all!.
at times i forgot this was supposedly a "song!."
i thought i was reading a story!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
at times i forgot this was supposedly a "song!."
i thought i was reading a story!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
That kinda!.!.sucks!.
xD
Sorry!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
xD
Sorry!.Www@Enter-QA@Com