Help with writing song lyrics?!


Question: Help with writing song lyrics!?
Help me some more!?
I need another verse please!.

Heres what I've got: [first few lines are cheesy ]

Wake up and never realize
I've got my head in a cloud
And I'm swimming in lies!.
I try so hard to make you proud
But you flash a smile and cast me aside!.
I'm just here so your amused
You talk through your teeth
Yet I can't tell I'm being used
Your fake smile is so reassuring
But I'm just an accesory,
In your style, so alluring

Chorus:
So I'll play my part
Without ever knowing
I'll be your puppet
My strings clearly showing
But I'll never see them, in my reflection!.
My visions been shot
Blinded with your love-less affection!.
And I'll play my part
Flawlessly, until my lines are finished!.
I'll give you my heart
Until your Happy Ending's accomplished!.

Thats what I have!.
Its about being used but not knowing about it!.

Much help is needed!.
Opinions are appreciated

Thanks much :]]

With love
- Gloom

Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
I've replied to your old post!. This time, I'll try my bestest to help, lol!. Okay what about this:

Wake up and never realize
My head is spinning
And I'm swimming in lies!.
As you keep plotting and winning
You flash a smile and cast me aside!.
I'm just here so your amused
You talk through your teeth
Yet I can't tell I'm being used
Your lies seem so reassuring
But I'm just an accesory,
In your style, so alluring

Chorus:
So I'll play my part
Without ever knowing
I'll be your puppet
My strings clearly showing
But I'll never see them, in my reflection!.
My visions been shot
Blinded with your love-less affection!.
And I'll play my part
Flawlessly, until my lines are finished!.
I'll give you my heart
Until your ending's accomplished!.

The words you spoke,
Like I wanted to hear!.
But something is missing,
Something just isn't right here!.
On the truth, you would choke
Smoke and mirrors, too well-played
I never saw the lies, deguised by your cloak
You blindsided me, my actions delayed
Why couldn't I see through you
You're much colder than I ever knew

Chorus

So keep on twisting the words
So far outstretched by your own means!.
Just keep waiting for my dreams to fall through
I never knew it was all in vain!.

Well, I hope this was of some kind of help!. I really love your lyrics, they're so well-spoken!. I don't think it sounds like rap!. Can't wait to hear the rest!. Glad you liked it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Hey! That's stunning

Happily Never after for me
Golden glory for you
Just take all the credit and I'll pretend I never knew
That you have been playing with me
Toying with my mind
You just lead the way
And I'll be right behind

Or something like that!.

You're talented

KayaWww@Enter-QA@Com



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