Do you like the lyrics in this song?!
Question: Do you like the lyrics in this song!?
Here is a song i made called Just Last Week!.!.!.how do you like the lyrics in the song!? Thanks :D
I thought we would be
A perfect match
Thought you and me had a chance
Maybe I was wrong
Stuck in school
Is so dramatic
Watchin everyone fight
Over one simple guy
Made me think
That I had done the right thing
By stayin with him
The next day you knew it
3rd period had past
Watchin everyone in the hall
Laughin with each other
Makein out against the wall
And in the bathroom stalls
Getting everyone together
Was the best of all
Thought that I didn’t fit in
Till I found him
He was so nice
And so forgiving
One I day totally flunked
And he walked away
Our relationship past by so quick
Too quick for me
And now hes gone
And now hes gone
Its seems like just last week
We were drivin in the car
Getting drunk behind our parents back
And makin love in the front seat
But now hes gone
Thought I had him
Yes I did
I thought I knew I did
Just last month we were holdin hands
As we walked to class
Everyone knew about our relationship
I don’t even know how it ended…
Its seems like just last week
We were drivin in the car
Getting drunk behind our parents back
And makin love in the front seat
But now hes gone
And now hes goneeeeeWww@Enter-QA@Com
I thought we would be
A perfect match
Thought you and me had a chance
Maybe I was wrong
Stuck in school
Is so dramatic
Watchin everyone fight
Over one simple guy
Made me think
That I had done the right thing
By stayin with him
The next day you knew it
3rd period had past
Watchin everyone in the hall
Laughin with each other
Makein out against the wall
And in the bathroom stalls
Getting everyone together
Was the best of all
Thought that I didn’t fit in
Till I found him
He was so nice
And so forgiving
One I day totally flunked
And he walked away
Our relationship past by so quick
Too quick for me
And now hes gone
And now hes gone
Its seems like just last week
We were drivin in the car
Getting drunk behind our parents back
And makin love in the front seat
But now hes gone
Thought I had him
Yes I did
I thought I knew I did
Just last month we were holdin hands
As we walked to class
Everyone knew about our relationship
I don’t even know how it ended…
Its seems like just last week
We were drivin in the car
Getting drunk behind our parents back
And makin love in the front seat
But now hes gone
And now hes goneeeeeWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
I can see this as a slow, artsy jazzy piece!. It doesn't rhyme enough to warrant pop status and the lack of a chorus will also mean the audience will be forced to feel like a teenager scorned by love to connect!.
That being said, you certainly do know how to open up and spill your guts!. Kudos, and keep writing!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
That being said, you certainly do know how to open up and spill your guts!. Kudos, and keep writing!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
About me: song is on http://www!.myspace!.com/onehiqWww@Enter-QA@Com
sorry, sweetie makes no sense and i do not like it teens don't need to be hearing that kind of music lyrics!. try again!Www@Enter-QA@Com
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