How does my song sound?!
Question: How does my song sound!?
How does my song sound!?!?
Do you like it!?
Tell me how you feel
In this kinda love
You make me wanna give up
But I keep tryin
Wastin my time
All I wanna do
Is be, be with you
You make me try harder
And harder the day goes
Cause I feel sorry
And blue too
Now I have gave up
All of our love
And you didn’t run--uh-uh-uhn
Never eh ever
You make me cry - eye- eye -eye
All day long
Oh yes you do
You’ve made me try , hy , hy , hy
You’ve made me work
Now Ive decited to make you my jerk
Now that chuve punished me
I have betrayed you
Our love has gone away
What can I say
You make me try harder
You make me work stronger
You make me go higher
And you make ME- eee--eee--eee--eee
You make me , me
and yes, i wrote it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Do you like it!?
Tell me how you feel
In this kinda love
You make me wanna give up
But I keep tryin
Wastin my time
All I wanna do
Is be, be with you
You make me try harder
And harder the day goes
Cause I feel sorry
And blue too
Now I have gave up
All of our love
And you didn’t run--uh-uh-uhn
Never eh ever
You make me cry - eye- eye -eye
All day long
Oh yes you do
You’ve made me try , hy , hy , hy
You’ve made me work
Now Ive decited to make you my jerk
Now that chuve punished me
I have betrayed you
Our love has gone away
What can I say
You make me try harder
You make me work stronger
You make me go higher
And you make ME- eee--eee--eee--eee
You make me , me
and yes, i wrote it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
It is really good I love it you should video tape you singing it and put on youtube i will watch your a really good song writerWww@Enter-QA@Com
I think it's butifule sounds like it would be good but make sure you set the right pace for it so that it dosn't lose meaningWww@Enter-QA@Com