Please rate my song?!


Question: Please rate my song!?
Ok, so my friend and I have a "club" called "The Trouble Twinz"
(I'm 12, she's 11!.)

And we wrote a song,
and I want your opinion!.

So here it goes:

"Here comes trouble"

"We are the trouble twinzzzzzz"

"we got trouble in us!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!."

"trouble's who we areeeee"

"and trouble's what we do!.!.!.!.!.!."

"you better watch out, 'cuz troubles comin' after youuuu!!!!"

"t-r-o-u-b-l-e, that spells you 'n me"

"a little bit of angel, a little bit of devil, lets see what you can be"

"troubles who we areeee, and troubles what we dooo, you better watch out, cuz troubles comin after youuuuuuuuuu, ooh,ooh,ooh,ooh ohhhhh, (singing slowly) you better watch out!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.cuz troubles!.!.!.!.comin!.!.!.!.!.!.after!.!.!.!.!.youuuuu!.!.!.
!"

"you betta' watch out
!"

so!.!.!.!.whad'ya think!?Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
not bad considering you guys age and everything!.!.!.its a bit repetitive but you could switch it up a bit!.!.!.try not saying trouble so often because it takes away from the depth of the lyrics!.!.!.!.good job though!Www@Enter-QA@Com

not bad, it fits well, but try to do some more rhyming in the first bit!.!.!. unless you and your friend are really good singers, it will sound poorly connected!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

its good but dont take it to the bank there is already a song just like only a little bit different but its good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Sweetheart, Nursery Rhymes sound better and make more sense than that; sorry Sweetie!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

its interesting!!! really! never heard anything like it! really! (NOT IN A MEAN WAY!)Www@Enter-QA@Com

I really like it! Keep up the good work!Www@Enter-QA@Com

i love it!! lol it's coolWww@Enter-QA@Com



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