Is this a good start to a song?!
Question: Is this a good start to a song!?
It was mid July, in that hot summertime
It Their first date, at a quarter till nine
They went down, to the old pizza parlor
It was all going fine, until he spilled his wine
Then she just laughed, and laughed again
One year later, they were still going strong
Sitting at home, drinking Jose Cuervos all night long
He was thinking, what could go wrong
Then she, got a call on the phone
Then she laughed, and laughed again
im only 14, so, im trying to start a country song, just rate this 1-10, and make a comment , if u likeWww@Enter-QA@Com
It Their first date, at a quarter till nine
They went down, to the old pizza parlor
It was all going fine, until he spilled his wine
Then she just laughed, and laughed again
One year later, they were still going strong
Sitting at home, drinking Jose Cuervos all night long
He was thinking, what could go wrong
Then she, got a call on the phone
Then she laughed, and laughed again
im only 14, so, im trying to start a country song, just rate this 1-10, and make a comment , if u likeWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
9- your rymes are good!. but sort of a pointless song!. would be good with a good acoustic guitar and steady drum beatWww@Enter-QA@Com
Its good for ur age !. U can go this way too
" It was all going fine until he spilled his wine "
"She gave him her hand and said its fine "
"Lets move on and enjoy the sunshine "Www@Enter-QA@Com
" It was all going fine until he spilled his wine "
"She gave him her hand and said its fine "
"Lets move on and enjoy the sunshine "Www@Enter-QA@Com