Do you like the song lyrics wrote?Please rate 1-10!


Question: Do you like the song lyrics wrote!?Please rate 1-10
"Why"

You're sitting there looking beautiful
I'm way over here playing with my hair
I need you I know it in my soul
But soon you won't be over there

As you walk away
the room darkens and
I just wanna say

[Chorus]
Why does the sun set,
Why does the moon come up
Why are there leaves on a tree
Oh, baby can't you see!?
Why can't you see the one who loves you is me!?
Why can't you see!?

You show up here looking your best
Those big green eyes
Nearly kill me to death

But to you I'm just another girl on your street
You smile at me and I swoon
When you look at me you're the only one I see
I think of you and whistle a tune

[Chorus]
Why does the sun set,
Why does the moon come up,
Why are there leaves on a tree,
Oh baby can't you see!?
Why can't you see the one who loves you is me!?

Our story's almost done
But it seems like it just begun
Now you know it

Your hands are in mine
Now we are intertwined
I think back how it used to be

[Chorus]
Why does the sun set,
Why does the moon come up
Why are there leaves on a tree
Oh baby can't you see!?
Why can't you see the one that loves you is me!?

Now our story's done
Let me add just one more thing
This is the story, that now we will sing

I know why you hold me
Because I'm now your girl
Now you can see
I'm needed in your world
I know why you kiss me,
Run your fingers through my hair
Its because you love me
And now you can see!.!.!.

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Answers:
if ten is the highs its a ten it is a beautiful song it is awsome i will put it in my book of songs you are awsome great job

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pretty good for your first song! i think it needs to flow better tho!. and plz take out nearly kill me to death!. othere than that its great!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

10
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I really like them!. You are good at writing songs!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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