Are these solid song lyrics?!
Question: Are these solid song lyrics!?
The Aftermath of Love
(Verse 1)
And so I can't trust you at all
Just a small price to pay when you fall
And I can't let anyone else in
For they'll see just the hell I'm in
And how could you do this to me
After all you had made me see
(bridge)
I know you saw us dying
I know, I heard your crying
(chorus)
Could you believe this when it happened!?
And could you stay awake for the after
The aftermath of love
(verse 2)
Do you think, it’s all fun and games!?
Even after you threw it all away
Do you think it didn’t mean that much!?
That my body doesn’t miss your touch
Did you think you’d fall asleep!?
Dreaming lies we’d never keep
(bridge)
(chorus)
You couldn’t deceive me when it happened
And I was wide awake even after
The aftermath of love
Couldn’t you see it crashing!?
And I fell asleep just after
The aftermath of love
(bridge)
(chorus)
And could you believe this when it happened!?
And could you stay awake for the after
The aftermath of love
You couldn’t deceive me when it happened
And I was wide awake even after
The aftermath of love
I know you saw us crashing
And I fell asleep just after
The aftermath of love
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(Verse 1)
And so I can't trust you at all
Just a small price to pay when you fall
And I can't let anyone else in
For they'll see just the hell I'm in
And how could you do this to me
After all you had made me see
(bridge)
I know you saw us dying
I know, I heard your crying
(chorus)
Could you believe this when it happened!?
And could you stay awake for the after
The aftermath of love
(verse 2)
Do you think, it’s all fun and games!?
Even after you threw it all away
Do you think it didn’t mean that much!?
That my body doesn’t miss your touch
Did you think you’d fall asleep!?
Dreaming lies we’d never keep
(bridge)
(chorus)
You couldn’t deceive me when it happened
And I was wide awake even after
The aftermath of love
Couldn’t you see it crashing!?
And I fell asleep just after
The aftermath of love
(bridge)
(chorus)
And could you believe this when it happened!?
And could you stay awake for the after
The aftermath of love
You couldn’t deceive me when it happened
And I was wide awake even after
The aftermath of love
I know you saw us crashing
And I fell asleep just after
The aftermath of love
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Answers:
ohkay well i think ur song is really good i would lyk to hear the tune of it :) put it on youtube or something!. not a lot of ppl can write good songs so thats talent right there!.
check my song out:
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=VfePcI-PC!.!.!.
hope you like it and it inspires you to put up your music :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
check my song out:
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=VfePcI-PC!.!.!.
hope you like it and it inspires you to put up your music :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
holy guacamole!. these are solid!. i love that they don't rhyme!. my favorite songs don't rhyme!. wow!. i can kinda feel this song with an old my chem vibe!. i love them!. good job!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
omfg thtz good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ill b the first 2 buy ur song!Www@Enter-QA@Com
That's really good!!!
Did you make it up!?
Cause you would be a natrual!.
When I grow up and become a singer I want you 2 write my songs!.
Good luck :pWww@Enter-QA@Com
Did you make it up!?
Cause you would be a natrual!.
When I grow up and become a singer I want you 2 write my songs!.
Good luck :pWww@Enter-QA@Com
I think so!. Over all it is really good!. If it had a good beat I would totally buy it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I actually think they are pretty darned good lyrics man!. Good work!Www@Enter-QA@Com
verse 1: you shouldnt rhyme in with inWww@Enter-QA@Com