Do you like these lyrics? What should i name the song?!


Question: Do you like these lyrics!? What should i name the song!?
Okay so i posted this earlier and you guys gave me some tips!. i hope its better now!. feel free to tell me otherwise!.
also HELP ME NAME IT!

btw i'm fourteen and this is played on an acoustic guitar!.

*the first part is slow*

I don’t like her
she isn’t a good friend
she'll stab your back
and then it wont mend

one day you're in
and the next day you're out
best friends forever
but I always had doubts

*now its fast*

she flirted with your boyfriend
then stole him away
she tricked all of your friends
only to get her way

Chorus:
Yeah yeah
And I swear
She’s just jealous anyway
Yeah yeah
And I swear
My boyfriend really is gay
Yeah yeah
And I swear
They deserve each other just the same
Yeah yeah
I swear


as soon as she has them
she'll throw them aside
she only wanted you to have nothing
and now your friends stand by her side

the true friends with me
and the false with her
I kind of feel sorry
but pity isn’t the answer

Chorus

Is she really like that
all the boys always ask
but they don’t realize is
it's all just a pretty mask

Chorus

Bridge:
Karmas gonna slap her in the face some day

Chorus x2

Yeah yeah yeah
And I swear


*slow again*

Yeah yeah yeah
And I swear


thanks for reading!
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Answers:
omg i love i would totally buy this song youve got some real good talent!Www@Enter-QA@Com

A few of the lyrics are!.!.!. off sounding!.!.!. Like "she'll stab you in the back, and then it won't mend"!.!.

But overall, I like it!.

I think it should be called "I Swear" or "Pity's Not The Answer" or "Standing on the Sidelines!."

^_^ Hope this helps!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

that is very good it sound like the song should be called :
just the way it isWww@Enter-QA@Com

haha i love! pretend her name is samantha

call it

samantha the *****

or

______ the *****Www@Enter-QA@Com

I SWEAR could be a good name for the songWww@Enter-QA@Com

i think its really good!. and you should name it i swear!. i think its REALLY good!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

I like! You're really good! How about, "True or False"Www@Enter-QA@Com

Its good!.!.!.!. you should name it XO/BSWww@Enter-QA@Com

I love it, can you sing!?Www@Enter-QA@Com



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