Thoughts on this lyric!
Question: Thoughts on this lyric
"Stars shine white lights, brightly, so I don't feel so alone tonight!."Www@Enter-QA@Com
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It would be better if there was a little too it than that!. Can you give us some more!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
sounds like
"star light star bright, first star i see tonight"
add a little more of yourself, originality
g'luck w/ ur writinWww@Enter-QA@Com
"star light star bright, first star i see tonight"
add a little more of yourself, originality
g'luck w/ ur writinWww@Enter-QA@Com
Isn't that already a song!? If it's not you need to write more to it!. It's not that good either!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
syllibles don't match!.!.!. but stars seem so comen try to change that with moonlight or something!. well good luck!
p!.s!. I agree with captain c -don't like brightly!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
p!.s!. I agree with captain c -don't like brightly!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it better without adding "brightly" !.!.!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
i dont like itWww@Enter-QA@Com