I need the illest rappers to judge my flows. only judge if you know how plz.!


Question: I need the illest rappers to judge my flows!. only judge if you know how plz!.
my flow is superb and my lyrics are firm,
so when i bust every1 spread like germ,
i devour other mcs like birds eat worms,
i carry my talent like a fly carries eggs,
so if i drop 1 every1 runs for it like sperm,
rapping ideas are stuck to my head like perms,
when i open my mouth case is adjurned,
cuz when i spit once the favour is never returned,
im a privelege and my lyrics are something you earn,
my flow is as hot as the sun,
so i bust evry1 receives 3rd degree burns,
i release heat thatll melt butter and leave you churned,
just hope you learn b4 u get ripped apart,
my bars are bananas, climbing and wild in many parts,
you can say i spit monkey bars,
i dont want to become a rapstar like timbaland cuz i like myself the way i are,
my **** is ****** up like getting run over by a parked car,

judge it out of 10 plz!.
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Answers:
6 1/2

i like the lyrics and the style, its hard to judge by reading cuz i dont know the pace but i assume the pace is fast and i like how i am able to make thatassumption based on how you put it together but i thought some of the lines didnt really flow very well those were 4, 10, and 2nd to last but with a litttle editing it cud be very goodWww@Enter-QA@Com

Im gonna give you a 5 for effort!. Now here is what is wrong with ALL a that!. You have too many metaphors but nothing to tie them all together!. Its almost like you wrote a whole bunch of one liners and strung them all together!. Try to make it flow more and take out some of the metaphors that dont make sense with this beat!. GLWww@Enter-QA@Com

yo you need a beat homie!.

Other than that its kind of dope!.

also it would help if you said if u rap fast or slow!.

Peace Www@Enter-QA@Com

1!.

People like you should never rap!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Its pretty good a solid 6 Www@Enter-QA@Com

4 - 5!. it had some good lines but others were straight down wack!.
keep goingWww@Enter-QA@Com

Dog that was wack!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

noWww@Enter-QA@Com

please stop while you're ahead!.!.!.!. Www@Enter-QA@Com



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