Can I get Ya opinion on my song PLZ????!
Question: Can I get Ya opinion on my song PLZ!?!?!?!?
Answers:
So you know, i not only make beats, but i produce songs too!.
1!. Don't listen to these lames!.!.!. u r on beat, that aint the problem
2!. The beat is huff!.!.!. real talk!.!.!. i don't know if u made it or ur guy, but get somethin new!. + don't sample Akon cause if u wanted to use this as a demo, no one would give it the time of day!.
3!. !!!! MOST IMPORTANT !!!!!! u use similies too much!. That is saying something isLIKE something else!. Listen to any of ur favorate rappers!. They will most offten say one thing is another be4 one thing is like another!.
4!.Ur timing is off!. ur not off beat!.Utry to put to many words into each line!. if you can get ur point across wit less words ur all good (start wit all them LIKES)
I could go o, cause this is what i do, but keep up the hard work my ***Www@Enter-QA@Com
1!. Don't listen to these lames!.!.!. u r on beat, that aint the problem
2!. The beat is huff!.!.!. real talk!.!.!. i don't know if u made it or ur guy, but get somethin new!. + don't sample Akon cause if u wanted to use this as a demo, no one would give it the time of day!.
3!. !!!! MOST IMPORTANT !!!!!! u use similies too much!. That is saying something isLIKE something else!. Listen to any of ur favorate rappers!. They will most offten say one thing is another be4 one thing is like another!.
4!.Ur timing is off!. ur not off beat!.Utry to put to many words into each line!. if you can get ur point across wit less words ur all good (start wit all them LIKES)
I could go o, cause this is what i do, but keep up the hard work my ***Www@Enter-QA@Com
yeah you gotta add more swag to ya flow!. sounds 2 laid back!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
Its Alright But your is a lil' weak
your flow isnt that weak but some bars you dont land on the snareWww@Enter-QA@Com
your flow isnt that weak but some bars you dont land on the snareWww@Enter-QA@Com
its good!.!. im just not a big fan of the beat!.Www@Enter-QA@Com