Rate my song please, I wrote it and want honest opinions on it!
Question: Rate my song please, I wrote it and want honest opinions on it
How does this song I wrote sound!?!.!.I want honest opinions on it and ways to improve it!.!.!.Rate it on a scale of 1-10 1 being lame 10 being completley awsome!. Here is:
Song: Wait and break
Cold, Im awake but asleep
the thought of you scare’s me but calm’s me
I tell myself that I will be ok and the thoughts will fade
But they keep coming back to me
I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed
In my dream I see you and me, when I wake up I see you and him
And I don’t know what I can do
I tried to show you that I cared but you never saw until it was too late
The thought of failure continues to haunt me
I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed
It’s far too late for me now, you have moved on
The thought of me has faded from you
I try to lie to myself and think there is something there
But I realilize there is nothing no more
I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed
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Song: Wait and break
Cold, Im awake but asleep
the thought of you scare’s me but calm’s me
I tell myself that I will be ok and the thoughts will fade
But they keep coming back to me
I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed
In my dream I see you and me, when I wake up I see you and him
And I don’t know what I can do
I tried to show you that I cared but you never saw until it was too late
The thought of failure continues to haunt me
I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed
It’s far too late for me now, you have moved on
The thought of me has faded from you
I try to lie to myself and think there is something there
But I realilize there is nothing no more
I see you everyday hoping for a sign that will never come
I continue to Wait and break until I fade away
You showed me once, but I never realilzed
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Answers:
this song comes from the heart!. really good lyrics, filled with emotion!.
i'll give it a 8 or 9ish!.
that's just my opinion!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
i'll give it a 8 or 9ish!.
that's just my opinion!. Www@Enter-QA@Com
i rate you a 100!.!.!. that is a great song!.!. you should find some music that goes with it!.!.!. and send it to me!. i would love to hear it with the musicWww@Enter-QA@Com
10 its very good and i relate to it sadlyWww@Enter-QA@Com