Rate MY rap #4?(lol)!
Question: Rate MY rap #4!?(lol)
ok had to trick ya'll on tha last one!. lol!. but this one is sentimental like his and it wasnt pre-written
march of 93, survivor of my brother born in 89
moms died couple months later, wasnt they time
i was too young then to realize tha tragedy
after a couple years of questions i had finally fathomed it
never cried, knew i had to make it on my own
if i acted up, i had to take it on my own
felt like Pac, young and hopeless
sometimes pain give u strength for u to focus
on success, figure ways out of turmoil like Carlito in that pool hall
tried to show em i was wise but i was too small
never thought i would make it like i was Marvin Sapp
skipped death 4 times ni99a marvel that
no comic book rhymes, imma keep it nonfiction
im man enough like Akon to tell my con-victions
im 15 with a 30 year old mind
i done seen and done things ya'll like to put in ya rhymes
i wish i aint do it either but dont live with regret
its irrelevant but tell me if i get ya respectWww@Enter-QA@Com
march of 93, survivor of my brother born in 89
moms died couple months later, wasnt they time
i was too young then to realize tha tragedy
after a couple years of questions i had finally fathomed it
never cried, knew i had to make it on my own
if i acted up, i had to take it on my own
felt like Pac, young and hopeless
sometimes pain give u strength for u to focus
on success, figure ways out of turmoil like Carlito in that pool hall
tried to show em i was wise but i was too small
never thought i would make it like i was Marvin Sapp
skipped death 4 times ni99a marvel that
no comic book rhymes, imma keep it nonfiction
im man enough like Akon to tell my con-victions
im 15 with a 30 year old mind
i done seen and done things ya'll like to put in ya rhymes
i wish i aint do it either but dont live with regret
its irrelevant but tell me if i get ya respectWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
sounds good man, good to see another person who has sense in their head unlike the first answer guy who is a haterWww@Enter-QA@Com
it's o!.k as words but to really get the feel of it we need to hear you spit it with passion!.thats what makes it or breaks it your delivery!.so for now 1 out of 5 you get 3Www@Enter-QA@Com
The words "Rate My Rap" automatically tell me the siht is whack!. I'mma be honest!.!.I ain't even read the ****, and I can still tell it's weak cuz you stuck postin your siht on this site!.
Fcuk It - 2 Points mafuckaWww@Enter-QA@Com
Fcuk It - 2 Points mafuckaWww@Enter-QA@Com
Here we go again!. Another 'Rate - My - I - Had - It - Hard' rap!.
Why is it that all of these raps are either negative or depressing!?!? Can't someone write about some happy shyt!?!?
Its Aiight!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Why is it that all of these raps are either negative or depressing!?!? Can't someone write about some happy shyt!?!?
Its Aiight!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
4/10Www@Enter-QA@Com