Would you care to read a bit of my song?!
Question: Would you care to read a bit of my song!?
I am not finished!.!.!. I have about two more verses and a bridge to do!. Here, read some verses and tell me what you think:
Hold on to your hat, babe
And hold on to my hand
You want me to run to you
When I can hardly stand
We don't need to try
To beat the competition
'Cause we don't even see the prizes
When we try so hard to win them
Be nice please!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Hold on to your hat, babe
And hold on to my hand
You want me to run to you
When I can hardly stand
We don't need to try
To beat the competition
'Cause we don't even see the prizes
When we try so hard to win them
Be nice please!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Sounds quite good but its hard to actually recognize how good the song would be without the tune!. Without the tune it just sounds like a poem!. But will probably be great!Www@Enter-QA@Com
whoa looks great
good jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
good jobWww@Enter-QA@Com
i like that!.
it reminds me of like cute is what we aim for lyrics!.
good stuff!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
it reminds me of like cute is what we aim for lyrics!.
good stuff!.Www@Enter-QA@Com