Would you care to read a bit of my song?!


Question: Would you care to read a bit of my song!?
I am not finished!.!.!. I have about two more verses and a bridge to do!. Here, read some verses and tell me what you think:

Hold on to your hat, babe
And hold on to my hand
You want me to run to you
When I can hardly stand

We don't need to try
To beat the competition
'Cause we don't even see the prizes
When we try so hard to win them

Be nice please!Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
Sounds quite good but its hard to actually recognize how good the song would be without the tune!. Without the tune it just sounds like a poem!. But will probably be great!Www@Enter-QA@Com

whoa looks great
good jobWww@Enter-QA@Com

i like that!.
it reminds me of like cute is what we aim for lyrics!.
good stuff!.Www@Enter-QA@Com



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