Some lyrics i wrote because im bored........?!
Question: Some lyrics i wrote because im bored!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
my name is smoothgroover
give me a mic and i will sooth ya
give me a gun and ill shoot ya
in the head, to make sure ya dead!.
Hey tell me, what must i do to get a star around here!?
drive a car into a brick wall from afar!?
Make you think i was hurt
but supprise im alive jerk!
Im already high, why cry!?
im standing here with two fists ready to put the swellin on ya eye
make you stand, turn around, hound like a dog
and run home crying into the mist and the fog!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
give me a mic and i will sooth ya
give me a gun and ill shoot ya
in the head, to make sure ya dead!.
Hey tell me, what must i do to get a star around here!?
drive a car into a brick wall from afar!?
Make you think i was hurt
but supprise im alive jerk!
Im already high, why cry!?
im standing here with two fists ready to put the swellin on ya eye
make you stand, turn around, hound like a dog
and run home crying into the mist and the fog!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
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cool !!! very good!. your quite talentend aren't ya !?
xx =)
*Jeezz whats up wit all d thumbs down, ppl are very sensitve today aren't they !!!! ***Www@Enter-QA@Com
xx =)
*Jeezz whats up wit all d thumbs down, ppl are very sensitve today aren't they !!!! ***Www@Enter-QA@Com
Thing is, you played your "Get out of Jail free" card early on by declaring you wrote it as a pastiche of rap!.
I'd suggest you really wanted folk to like it!. You've been slaving over that for ages, eh!?
If you are bored, then take up origami!.Your bound to have paper lying around from your many attempts at rap poetry!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'd suggest you really wanted folk to like it!. You've been slaving over that for ages, eh!?
If you are bored, then take up origami!.Your bound to have paper lying around from your many attempts at rap poetry!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
hate it!. typical fake rap lyrics!. tell us the TRUTH once in a while, then maybe you'll get a star!. Mimmick rap!. Babydoll please, that wasn't even funny!.!.!.next time try and make it funny, kay!?
We're slow!? Yea!.!.!.go play in the middle of the road!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
We're slow!? Yea!.!.!.go play in the middle of the road!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
a little violent, but they would make a good rap song maybe!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I would like to add a few words to that!.
I would return the honours with a stick
until you was swollen like a pr-ick!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I would return the honours with a stick
until you was swollen like a pr-ick!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I hope you never become bored again!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
not very original and doesn't sound like it would fit to a beat!. Must try harder!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
drive a car into a brick wall from afar!?
Make you think i was hurt
but supprise im alive jerk!
ComedyWww@Enter-QA@Com
Make you think i was hurt
but supprise im alive jerk!
ComedyWww@Enter-QA@Com
You're bored! Imagine how I feel, I've just read your lyrics!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Jesus, Are you feeling ok pal!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
not for me!.!.!. what are u on about!? if u want a star then work for it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
good but they r violant!.!.!.can u write some for me!.!.!.i d like that ,!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yeah u were board!.!.!. and it shows!.!.!. its not that good!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Please, God, find something to occupy yourself and stop being bored!. Cause the lyrics stink (unless you're about 13)!. Bit of crit for you!.!.!.!. 'afar' is not a word which goes in a rap lyric, it's just a contrived rhyme!. 'hound like a dog'!? 'Howl' maybe, 'hound' no!. 'shoot ya in the head, to make sure ya dead'!. Gangsta nonsense circa 1992!.
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Oh yes, of course, how slow of us all, of COURSE it was pastiche!.!.!.!. of course if you;d had a hugely positive reaction then I suspect it wouldn't have been!.!.!. I can only assume you are, in the vernacular, a wanksta!.
Edit 2: The guy accuses us of being slow - two spelling errors in a single attempt at writing the word 'mimic' suggests he's hardly the fastest train out of Clapham!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
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Oh yes, of course, how slow of us all, of COURSE it was pastiche!.!.!.!. of course if you;d had a hugely positive reaction then I suspect it wouldn't have been!.!.!. I can only assume you are, in the vernacular, a wanksta!.
Edit 2: The guy accuses us of being slow - two spelling errors in a single attempt at writing the word 'mimic' suggests he's hardly the fastest train out of Clapham!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
If you're bored then get a playstation or do a jigsaw puzzle!. No need to bore the rest of us with this pooh!.
I bet your name isn't Smoothgroover and if you had a mic it wouldn't be soothing unless you knocked me out with it!.
also, why would I just give you a gun when you say that if I do you'll shoot me in the head to make sure that I'm dead!.
Tell you what, why not give me a jelly and I'll put it in my belly!. Doesn't that sound more friendly!? Wouldn't the world be a better place if we all just ate jelly rather than shooting each other!.
I was a bit worried when I thought you might drive into a wall, you know, in a car, from afar!. But then I saw that you were o!.k!. because you were a live jerk, which is better than being a dead jerk!.
As for all that running around in the mist because someone had been hit by your fist (one of two as I recall) with a swolen eye that made them cry because you were high and all that fog on the dog stuff, wow!. I mean where do you get this from!. Does it just come out of your head!. I think if you could put some human beatbox together with that and maybe gat one of your "posse" to sort of look mean and say "yeah" from under his baseball cap at the end of each line you could make it on to the x factor!. Just make sure you wear your best track suit and put on all your sovriegn rings and you'll look dead cool!.
Really though, it's awful!. It sounds just like every other wanna be with no talent who think all you have to do is bang on about how dangerous you are and what you'd do if you had a gun!. Yawn, this is old old old!. My grandad saw it and said "Bloody hell are people still spittin that crap" nad he's 101 years old!. Really, give it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I bet your name isn't Smoothgroover and if you had a mic it wouldn't be soothing unless you knocked me out with it!.
also, why would I just give you a gun when you say that if I do you'll shoot me in the head to make sure that I'm dead!.
Tell you what, why not give me a jelly and I'll put it in my belly!. Doesn't that sound more friendly!? Wouldn't the world be a better place if we all just ate jelly rather than shooting each other!.
I was a bit worried when I thought you might drive into a wall, you know, in a car, from afar!. But then I saw that you were o!.k!. because you were a live jerk, which is better than being a dead jerk!.
As for all that running around in the mist because someone had been hit by your fist (one of two as I recall) with a swolen eye that made them cry because you were high and all that fog on the dog stuff, wow!. I mean where do you get this from!. Does it just come out of your head!. I think if you could put some human beatbox together with that and maybe gat one of your "posse" to sort of look mean and say "yeah" from under his baseball cap at the end of each line you could make it on to the x factor!. Just make sure you wear your best track suit and put on all your sovriegn rings and you'll look dead cool!.
Really though, it's awful!. It sounds just like every other wanna be with no talent who think all you have to do is bang on about how dangerous you are and what you'd do if you had a gun!. Yawn, this is old old old!. My grandad saw it and said "Bloody hell are people still spittin that crap" nad he's 101 years old!. Really, give it up!.Www@Enter-QA@Com