Are these lyrics corny?!
Question: Are these lyrics corny!?
im in a band and, wrote these lyrics, im 14
all started of at the age of 12
i was just a youngster without a clue
but then i realised there was something new
what went wrong as i came obsessed with the idol to
as time ticked pass!.
thought i was just having fun
until the idol had gone wrong
at first just a bit of fun
how i realised the obsession grew
by the clothes in the wardorbe and
the hairstyle to, it forced into some one new
at 14 my farther throw me in therapy
he said it will work for me
well it turned out it's a broken dream
and there's no excuse accept form
the world's betrayed me!.
i thought i was having fun
until the idol had gone wrong
well the idol had just gone wrong
well the idol had just gone wrong
is just another one
what does the future holde for me
well im just another fashion victim
well i declare i don't care no more
well is just another idol that gone wronWww@Enter-QA@Com
all started of at the age of 12
i was just a youngster without a clue
but then i realised there was something new
what went wrong as i came obsessed with the idol to
as time ticked pass!.
thought i was just having fun
until the idol had gone wrong
at first just a bit of fun
how i realised the obsession grew
by the clothes in the wardorbe and
the hairstyle to, it forced into some one new
at 14 my farther throw me in therapy
he said it will work for me
well it turned out it's a broken dream
and there's no excuse accept form
the world's betrayed me!.
i thought i was having fun
until the idol had gone wrong
well the idol had just gone wrong
well the idol had just gone wrong
is just another one
what does the future holde for me
well im just another fashion victim
well i declare i don't care no more
well is just another idol that gone wronWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Hi,
I think you are on the right track!. By that I mean you wrote something! You put your feelings down!
I would say continue, if this is what you want to do!.
The song writing skills get better and better the more you do it!.
Keep Going!
Best wishes to you!
My husband has a little studio here at our house!. He writes songs and plays the instruments on all the tracks!. No, he is not "famous", no where near that, but he loves what he does!. And who knows!? Maybe some day!
Either way, he gets great happiness from expressing himself!.
Hope you find that too!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think you are on the right track!. By that I mean you wrote something! You put your feelings down!
I would say continue, if this is what you want to do!.
The song writing skills get better and better the more you do it!.
Keep Going!
Best wishes to you!
My husband has a little studio here at our house!. He writes songs and plays the instruments on all the tracks!. No, he is not "famous", no where near that, but he loves what he does!. And who knows!? Maybe some day!
Either way, he gets great happiness from expressing himself!.
Hope you find that too!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Okay all the answers so far are LAME, so let me give you my expert/honest opinion: I liked it!. It's that simple- it's not corny at all, but I really wish I could hear it with a voice because if you have a good voice and the right music, then this song would be really good, honestly!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i thnk its too rhymy!.
musics supposed to give a good message: lyrics aren't everything!. its how u sing itt and the message behind it!.
i can see the message, its just not well put!. sounds kinda ammature to me =] i think dat if u replaced some of the words with more powerful ones that better express the message ur trying to give it would be better (:Www@Enter-QA@Com
musics supposed to give a good message: lyrics aren't everything!. its how u sing itt and the message behind it!.
i can see the message, its just not well put!. sounds kinda ammature to me =] i think dat if u replaced some of the words with more powerful ones that better express the message ur trying to give it would be better (:Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yeah, a little cheasy!. There not really lyrics, more like a free verse poem!. If you want it to sound more like a song, try and rhyme a little more!. I understand it must have a deep story behind it, but the lyrics dont show it!. Sorry!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Ehhh!.!.!.They didn't appeal to me but lyrics aren't everything!. Remember it's the genre and the way you speak them and the music itself!. You should upload a link to you singing it!.
I'd listen and comment on it!. =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
I'd listen and comment on it!. =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
Hehe, it's a little corny, but if you have a good drummer & guitarist to help you rock it, I'm sure it could be awesome [:Www@Enter-QA@Com
You didn't take the answer my question so why should I take the time to answer yours!? Easy 2 points, and even easier 10!. And next time, if your going to answer me like that, don't leave your link!Www@Enter-QA@Com
what idol!?!? Answer mine please!
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Hahahahaehehahaha!!!! Your crackin me up!!!! To cheesy! Ghahahaha!Www@Enter-QA@Com
yeah!.!. kinda corny!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
this is really good :)
i would buy your song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i would buy your song!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
very gifted brain and beautiful lryricsWww@Enter-QA@Com
not corny at all! there interensting and diferent!.:DWww@Enter-QA@Com
pretty lamish sorryWww@Enter-QA@Com
nooo its really goood =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
not bad kid, not badWww@Enter-QA@Com
Put more emotion in it and use better vocab!.!.!.!.!.I think your on to a good start thoughWww@Enter-QA@Com
i like the lyrics but the beat is a little hard to find!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
yup , corny!Www@Enter-QA@Com
I don't think it's corny at all!. They are very nice lyrics especially at the age that you are!. You should upload your band's songs so could hear em!Www@Enter-QA@Com
What idol!?!?!? anyways yeah they sorta sound corny but don't give up you'll get there and anyways these days anyone can get on the radio with a bad voice and bad lyrics as well!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Yeah, its kinda weird lolWww@Enter-QA@Com
That is really good =]!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I like it:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
no offense,
but theyre a little corny!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
no offense though
But you could make them better
there's wayss
:]]
Good luckkWww@Enter-QA@Com
but theyre a little corny!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
no offense though
But you could make them better
there's wayss
:]]
Good luckkWww@Enter-QA@Com
It's not corny, it just doesn't make too much sense with the idol, very creative thoughWww@Enter-QA@Com
kind of cheeseyWww@Enter-QA@Com
yepWww@Enter-QA@Com
coolWww@Enter-QA@Com
its weirdWww@Enter-QA@Com
meh not to badWww@Enter-QA@Com