Does this sound okay and can you give me ideas?!
Question: Does this sound okay and can you give me ideas!?
Okay so i started this song and im kinda stuck!. I only have like 4 lines so far and i need your help!. Can you give me some lines that could fit!? If you give a line i would like your name (first and last) so i can give credit to you!. I won't use your name for anything im not a stalker or anything like that i promise!. I just wanna give you credit in the song if i use your line!.
But here is what little i have so far:
My life is so complicated
Nobody seems to understand
I feel so alone and broken inside
I just wanna run away and hide
okay thats it thats all i have!.
so help me add more to it please!.
thank you guys!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
But here is what little i have so far:
My life is so complicated
Nobody seems to understand
I feel so alone and broken inside
I just wanna run away and hide
okay thats it thats all i have!.
so help me add more to it please!.
thank you guys!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Detours in my life are plenty
I don't know which way to turn
The routine I know is all mixed up
It's time to crash and burn
The sun comes up each morning
The moon is there at night
I have lost my way in this world
Will the stars guide me with their light!?
It's up to me to understand and go about my way
Live a life of love and joy I am starting with today
No credit needed!. I am sure something can be used but it is YOUR song so go with what is on your mind!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I don't know which way to turn
The routine I know is all mixed up
It's time to crash and burn
The sun comes up each morning
The moon is there at night
I have lost my way in this world
Will the stars guide me with their light!?
It's up to me to understand and go about my way
Live a life of love and joy I am starting with today
No credit needed!. I am sure something can be used but it is YOUR song so go with what is on your mind!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Your rhyme and rhythm scheme is very basic!. If you are writing it for a pop song then that might be okay!. That being said, keep writing, you'll improve over time!.Www@Enter-QA@Com