Rate my rap 1-10(my 1st on here since idk when)?!

I been trying to work on my producing thing(workin on the music page), I been slackin on my rhymes, aint wrote in forever so tell me what you think!.

I been gone now im back like "Hovi's home!"
In 10 years i want mansions like Hovi's home
But dont think im slippin cuz im still holdin chrome
Stainless, dem things that leave a lil ni99a brainless
The pain swift, im workin every minute its the same shift
Cause we livin in the present dont expect the same gift
Blame Bush for this arrangement, frame him
Since Hussein, things lift in price, sh!t isnt nice
Rappers now, hot in the day but drift in the night
If i feel disrespect, prepare to feel the effects
As hollow tips compress through ya chest u reflect
Back on ya life, I laugh as I sit at my desk
My time is only money, I love it like VH1
But stay true, these rappers blind like they see 8 suns
Hip-hop's been in quicksand, they lettin' it sink
Aint worthy they pop artists they should rock wit N-SyncWww@Enter-QA@Com

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