Do you like this song I wrote?!


Question: Do you like this song I wrote!?
I feel this pain
And I'm happy again
I see why I feel this way
There's nobody around
And I have a frown
I see why this is this way
The air feels cold
And I feel so old
God knows why time slips away
Right now I feel good
And my life has stood
I just hope I can stay this way

Here it comes again
Here it comes again
It's the kryptonite for all men
Here it comes again
Here it comes again
It's the kryptonite for all men

My world stood still
Nothing got killed
I still felt like the same man
Nothing had changed
And I felt the same
I hope I can live again
This could lead
To my insanity
I hope I can stay a sane man
Here it comes
And I hope I can run
I hope I can escape this "man" ya!!!

Here it comes again
Here it comes again
It's the kryptonite for all men ya!!!
Here it comes again
Here it comes again
It's the kryptonite for all men ya!!!

(cont!.)Www@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
I would take out some of the unnecessary repetition
Other than that, its good (kind of depressing), but goodWww@Enter-QA@Com



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