I wrote a new verse. Rate it don't hate it (rate it from 1-10)?!
Question: I wrote a new verse!. Rate it don't hate it (rate it from 1-10)!?
I've analyzed this game homie, Don't act like you don't know me
It's the L2B steppin' on tha scene, I am mean
But for some reason i like to keep it clean
This game is all about the attitude, style and criticism
Nobody don't care nomore about lyricism, What's with them!?
Now it's all about dissin one another
Whatever happened to " brother from another mother"
You've brought me into the new game
No matter how good it is or lame
"No Pain No Gain" is our motto still
But if we don't work our @$$e$ off , we'll get grilled
But don't get me wrong, i'm not an idiot sticking to tradition
I've adapted to new Hip Hop and i'll make a prediction
Since greens make the world go round today
Only if our music is good, we get paid
What i'm sayin' is: If we're rich like crazy
The only reason will be our music is just as good as Jay Z's or Weezy's or Jeezy's
Whoever you think is great
The game has gotten tougher, it's no more child's play
Well New Hip Hop, L2B is here to stay
Done!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's the L2B steppin' on tha scene, I am mean
But for some reason i like to keep it clean
This game is all about the attitude, style and criticism
Nobody don't care nomore about lyricism, What's with them!?
Now it's all about dissin one another
Whatever happened to " brother from another mother"
You've brought me into the new game
No matter how good it is or lame
"No Pain No Gain" is our motto still
But if we don't work our @$$e$ off , we'll get grilled
But don't get me wrong, i'm not an idiot sticking to tradition
I've adapted to new Hip Hop and i'll make a prediction
Since greens make the world go round today
Only if our music is good, we get paid
What i'm sayin' is: If we're rich like crazy
The only reason will be our music is just as good as Jay Z's or Weezy's or Jeezy's
Whoever you think is great
The game has gotten tougher, it's no more child's play
Well New Hip Hop, L2B is here to stay
Done!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
It was AAIIIGGGHHT!.
check this one!.!.!.!.
We be livin in a world where da god is the cruelest
No matter how hard you try, cant live your life to da fullest
Ever since up is school had to be dodgin bullies
Up to now in the streets, gotta be dodgin bullets
And im a mexican in the US, with no where for turnin
they say the US is a meltin pot, is that why we burnin!?!?
No matter how much you worry bout beats and lyricism
you will never be able to defeat cruel critism
Then you got real homiez when its time to get laid
then they backstab each other just to try to get paid
thats just a lil 10 second verse!. just came up with it!.!.!.actually some of the lyrics i used based on what you saidWww@Enter-QA@Com
check this one!.!.!.!.
We be livin in a world where da god is the cruelest
No matter how hard you try, cant live your life to da fullest
Ever since up is school had to be dodgin bullies
Up to now in the streets, gotta be dodgin bullets
And im a mexican in the US, with no where for turnin
they say the US is a meltin pot, is that why we burnin!?!?
No matter how much you worry bout beats and lyricism
you will never be able to defeat cruel critism
Then you got real homiez when its time to get laid
then they backstab each other just to try to get paid
thats just a lil 10 second verse!. just came up with it!.!.!.actually some of the lyrics i used based on what you saidWww@Enter-QA@Com
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Steel sharpens steel, battle it out typed or audio, or drop verses for criticism from underground artists (Saigon, Joe Buddens, A~Jaxx, Ems, ect!.) and other ethusaists that actually KNOW Hip Hop!.
-PEACE-Www@Enter-QA@Com
i give it a 7!. you had some good rymes but at the end it got kina confusing!. i really liked the first part, "I've analyzed this game homie, Don't act like you don't know me"Www@Enter-QA@Com
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This bit had me rollin
"No Pain No Gain" is our motto still
But if we don't work our @$$e$ off , we'll get grilledWww@Enter-QA@Com
"No Pain No Gain" is our motto still
But if we don't work our @$$e$ off , we'll get grilledWww@Enter-QA@Com