Any changes to my song I wrote?!
Question: Any changes to my song I wrote!?
I wrote this song yesterday!.!.!. Any opinions or changes that should be made!?
V1- Do you think about me,
Like I think about you!?
Every second of the day,
I hope thats OK
What you mean to me,
No words can say,
Youre like the sunshine coming out on a rainy day!.
Refrain- When someone says your name,
I get so confused,
My heads still there,
But its not being used!.
Its in another place,
Where you're by my side,
I don't want to leave,
I feel so warm inside!.
V2- I know you're mine,
Do you know I'm yours!?
Any wish is my command,
I'll reach out my hand!.
How much I need you,
Words can't explain,
It's like I'm frail and old and you're my stable cane!.
Refrain
V3- It's not me and you,
Lets make it us,
Anywhere you want to go,
I won't say no!.
When you're with me,
I never shed a tear,
You're like sweet music ringing in my ear!.
Refrain
Do you think about me,
Like I think about you!?
You're my one and only love,
I hope you know it too!.
Thanks!Www@Enter-QA@Com
V1- Do you think about me,
Like I think about you!?
Every second of the day,
I hope thats OK
What you mean to me,
No words can say,
Youre like the sunshine coming out on a rainy day!.
Refrain- When someone says your name,
I get so confused,
My heads still there,
But its not being used!.
Its in another place,
Where you're by my side,
I don't want to leave,
I feel so warm inside!.
V2- I know you're mine,
Do you know I'm yours!?
Any wish is my command,
I'll reach out my hand!.
How much I need you,
Words can't explain,
It's like I'm frail and old and you're my stable cane!.
Refrain
V3- It's not me and you,
Lets make it us,
Anywhere you want to go,
I won't say no!.
When you're with me,
I never shed a tear,
You're like sweet music ringing in my ear!.
Refrain
Do you think about me,
Like I think about you!?
You're my one and only love,
I hope you know it too!.
Thanks!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Nope this is actually pretty good!.
You could now try and expand your song and create a tune(if you don't already have one)Www@Enter-QA@Com
You could now try and expand your song and create a tune(if you don't already have one)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Awesomeness =]
I MADE UP THAT WORD FOR YOU =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
I MADE UP THAT WORD FOR YOU =]Www@Enter-QA@Com
its really good!.u can try to sing and post it to ur myspace n get fans for you :)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Instead of "It's like I'm frail and old and you're my stable cane!." you could say "I'm hurting without you, please stop my pain!."
It's a really good song, nice job!Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's a really good song, nice job!Www@Enter-QA@Com