Another song I wrote comments please don't be mean just truthful please?!
Question: Another song I wrote comments please don't be mean just truthful please!?
I've been writing fsongs or four years since I was 10
I've got the whole d*mn world to see
Chorus
Do you remember how you held me!?
Do you remember how you kissed me!?
Do you remember how you talked to me!?
No!.!.!.!.!.!.!. cause it was far to long ago
you said you'd never leave me
you said you'd come to see me
and when you looked in my eyes
I can't believe I didn't relize
That once you were away
youweren't gonna come home and say
the 3 words that mean the world to me the 3 words that mean the world to any girl, any girl
(I love you) (I love you)
all those wasted years
all those wasted tears
all those nights I cried myself to sleep at night
wishing you were there to say "baby it'll be alright"
hours sitting by the phone
wondering why I'm all alone
I guess that you couldn't see
what I felt for you in me
thought that I would cease to be
you thought you were finally free
but I supose we both were wrong!.
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I've got the whole d*mn world to see
Chorus
Do you remember how you held me!?
Do you remember how you kissed me!?
Do you remember how you talked to me!?
No!.!.!.!.!.!.!. cause it was far to long ago
you said you'd never leave me
you said you'd come to see me
and when you looked in my eyes
I can't believe I didn't relize
That once you were away
youweren't gonna come home and say
the 3 words that mean the world to me the 3 words that mean the world to any girl, any girl
(I love you) (I love you)
all those wasted years
all those wasted tears
all those nights I cried myself to sleep at night
wishing you were there to say "baby it'll be alright"
hours sitting by the phone
wondering why I'm all alone
I guess that you couldn't see
what I felt for you in me
thought that I would cease to be
you thought you were finally free
but I supose we both were wrong!.
(see details for rest of song!.!.!.!.)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
Thats a really good song!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Sounds good, but what's the point - a guy left you & you wish he didn't!?
Anyways, you said you want the truth, but didn't want people to be mean!.!.!. well, sometimes the truth is mean, they come hand in hand!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Anyways, you said you want the truth, but didn't want people to be mean!.!.!. well, sometimes the truth is mean, they come hand in hand!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
great songWww@Enter-QA@Com
awww thats a great song!
Do you have a melody for it yet!?!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Do you have a melody for it yet!?!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
Looks pretty good to me, just need the right singer for it!.Www@Enter-QA@Com