Is this song terrible i wrote it?!
Question: Is this song terrible i wrote it!?
Memories
Promises are broken
pictures can get lost
but in the end you can find a friend when memories are held close to your heart
I never wanted to remember until one day when I forgot
they’re the answer to the question of who I am and who I can be ee
memories helped me be me
They help me to not repeat all the bad things that I’ve done
whether for greed or love, anger or lust or maybe just for fun
And no matter how they have helped me
Some people just don’t see
Some say that memories are bad that they just make you sad
Like the day a loved one was lost or when a friend went away
But do you want to forget that they want you to smile,
they want you to rejoice
just cause you can no longer hear they’re voice
doesn’t mean they left you all alone
So don’t you worry and don’t you fret
but the most important thing is (pause) don’t forget
I have happy memories and sad ones I hold inside
Like the day my sis first smiled and the day my mama died
Nothing is as important as the look they in their eyes
It touched my heart
Till the day we had to part
That can make all the difference
Oh, That can make all the difference
Don’t hold on to the past
But don’t let it slip away
It’s a brand new day
Make the most
to your memories (hold)
Have memories memories hold memories hold on tight memories, memories mem mem mem memories(hold note)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Promises are broken
pictures can get lost
but in the end you can find a friend when memories are held close to your heart
I never wanted to remember until one day when I forgot
they’re the answer to the question of who I am and who I can be ee
memories helped me be me
They help me to not repeat all the bad things that I’ve done
whether for greed or love, anger or lust or maybe just for fun
And no matter how they have helped me
Some people just don’t see
Some say that memories are bad that they just make you sad
Like the day a loved one was lost or when a friend went away
But do you want to forget that they want you to smile,
they want you to rejoice
just cause you can no longer hear they’re voice
doesn’t mean they left you all alone
So don’t you worry and don’t you fret
but the most important thing is (pause) don’t forget
I have happy memories and sad ones I hold inside
Like the day my sis first smiled and the day my mama died
Nothing is as important as the look they in their eyes
It touched my heart
Till the day we had to part
That can make all the difference
Oh, That can make all the difference
Don’t hold on to the past
But don’t let it slip away
It’s a brand new day
Make the most
to your memories (hold)
Have memories memories hold memories hold on tight memories, memories mem mem mem memories(hold note)Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
it's actually pretty good!. i love what it says in the beginning "i never wanted to remember until one day when i forgot!."Www@Enter-QA@Com
Sorry but to be quite honest with you the writing you have posted doesn't seem to have any rhythm to it what-so-ever!. Lyrics to a song cannot be just random and without a feeling for a beat!. This really isn't even a good poem!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
More like a poem than a song - where's the chorus, bridge, etc!.
I having a hard time understanding!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I having a hard time understanding!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
this song sounds very good!
Jesus saves, the only way to God is through Him!Www@Enter-QA@Com
Jesus saves, the only way to God is through Him!Www@Enter-QA@Com