What you think about my lyrics ?(10 points)?!


Question: What you think about my lyrics !?(10 points)!?
I feel so alone
There's nobody with me
I feel like this is the end
And no one wants to give a hand
What can I do!?
If I am too far!?
Of the truth

Oh I am a dreamer girl
On my own world
And I am passing in this beatiful door of the sadness
To the door of happiness

Oh my dreams Are turning truth
I finaly can walk around this world
O I am a dreamer girl
On my own world
Far of the lies
I don't have time for faking
I am making all this happen
I am a dreamer girl
That believe that dreams can turn truth
If you believe too
Don't care about the people that just talk about you
You'll laugh of them one day

Get your on way
Find a better place to stay
The life's only one
And you can't deny the bad days

Please tell me the truth!.!.
And I came from Brazil!.!.!.So please!.!.
Be sincere!.!.ok
KissesWww@Enter-QA@Com


Answers:
that song is AWESOME!!!! I wish I wrote it!.!.!.!.!. and don't worry i came from Europe so I know how it is when your grammar isn't perfect and not everthing you say makes sense!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
keep righting songs!.!.!.!.

-ValentinaWww@Enter-QA@Com

If your english was a bit better, i bet it'd be a bit
more solid, but i do like it!. a lot!. i grasped the
consept and i liked it!

Answer mine!?
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com

Wow!. They are amazing! Totally have potential!!.!.!.Go for it :) xWww@Enter-QA@Com

I LOVE IT I'd buy your CD anydayWww@Enter-QA@Com

Pretty cool!.!.!.!.very!.!.!.ummmm whats the word!? optimistic!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com

madders how u sing it i could rock itWww@Enter-QA@Com



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