Judge my rap out of 10 plz?!
Question: Judge my rap out of 10 plz!?
when i open my mouth and launch my attack remember you asked for it
ill make you sound whack before i show mercy and let y0u forfeit
see im real to myself unlike most of you
when i spit i spit the **** thatll undress you and your crew
my rhymes are like knives that rign true to my words
im a warrior equipped with hatchets for metaphors
my flow is racist to pricks like american history X ill smash your mouth on the side of the curves
you cant test this
il rip your head off like an iraqi terrorist
my flow is ridiculous and thats sayin the least
only started rapping yesterday and im already a beast
me and my raps are one like ying and yang
we'll attack from inside and bang on you like cramps
i couldnt give less **** if you thought my flow is weak
raps bring out a different side of me you would have thought i was mystique
my poetry is deep you'll drown in a sea of words
and on a beat, itll feel like you got run over by a wilderbeast herdWww@Enter-QA@Com
ill make you sound whack before i show mercy and let y0u forfeit
see im real to myself unlike most of you
when i spit i spit the **** thatll undress you and your crew
my rhymes are like knives that rign true to my words
im a warrior equipped with hatchets for metaphors
my flow is racist to pricks like american history X ill smash your mouth on the side of the curves
you cant test this
il rip your head off like an iraqi terrorist
my flow is ridiculous and thats sayin the least
only started rapping yesterday and im already a beast
me and my raps are one like ying and yang
we'll attack from inside and bang on you like cramps
i couldnt give less **** if you thought my flow is weak
raps bring out a different side of me you would have thought i was mystique
my poetry is deep you'll drown in a sea of words
and on a beat, itll feel like you got run over by a wilderbeast herdWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
im not going to lie; 7
well it rhymed, and there was some meaning in it!.!.!.it was ok by my standardsWww@Enter-QA@Com
well it rhymed, and there was some meaning in it!.!.!.it was ok by my standardsWww@Enter-QA@Com
I like it alot!. I give it a 10!. With lyrics that are typed, you have to find a beat!. I found that beat!. And it sounded good to me!. Could be improved but for your first time rappin in sound goodWww@Enter-QA@Com
3/10!.!.!.wasn't that great, seems like you worked a long time on that and couldn't seem to portray anything but un directed violence!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
i'm not a massive rap fan but i cracked up laughing at wilderbeast - sorry
keep trying though, it's good to have a hobbyWww@Enter-QA@Com
keep trying though, it's good to have a hobbyWww@Enter-QA@Com
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i enjoyed the wilderbeast herd line!. you need to throw in more lines about money and women if you want to make it big!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Ummm!.!.!.Yea kid you might wanna try again!.!.!.Not very good kidWww@Enter-QA@Com
CRAPWww@Enter-QA@Com
nice going **** 1/2Www@Enter-QA@Com
I think it would better for people to give a more accurate score if you posted a link to a clip of you performing them!. For those of us who have no interest in rap it is kinda hard to understand what they would sound like when being performed, when i read them they make no sense!.
I am not mocking rap or your written lyrics, but just trying to offer a suggestion that may enable more people to offer you a response and a more accurate opinion!.
Plus if you are wanting to do this as a career, your gonna have to get used to performing in front of people!. We could be your first audience!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
I am not mocking rap or your written lyrics, but just trying to offer a suggestion that may enable more people to offer you a response and a more accurate opinion!.
Plus if you are wanting to do this as a career, your gonna have to get used to performing in front of people!. We could be your first audience!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
rap is a real hustle
i had to quit high school my jr year to make it
im still struggling wit it
unless u live and breath rap leave it alone
rap consumes me homey
its all i care about
my imediate family and my rap group is all that matters
i stay up til 6 and 7 in the mornin recordin songs
i fight wit my momma bout havin allota ****** in here recordin
imma be serius wit u
yo rap aint gone hit wit a beat
im tellin u this rapper to rapper
im not sayin im the best in the world but i know wat it takes to make it and stand out
hit up my music page on myspace
myspace!.com/wez4genocideWww@Enter-QA@Com
i had to quit high school my jr year to make it
im still struggling wit it
unless u live and breath rap leave it alone
rap consumes me homey
its all i care about
my imediate family and my rap group is all that matters
i stay up til 6 and 7 in the mornin recordin songs
i fight wit my momma bout havin allota ****** in here recordin
imma be serius wit u
yo rap aint gone hit wit a beat
im tellin u this rapper to rapper
im not sayin im the best in the world but i know wat it takes to make it and stand out
hit up my music page on myspace
myspace!.com/wez4genocideWww@Enter-QA@Com