Rate me rhymin please#2?!
Question: Rate me rhymin please#2!?
a veteran yeah, headin for war so we can settle it there
if u heckle an stare il put your neck in a snare
to battle me is what it's like to wrestle a bear
im a faker, an immitator straight up
cos i say straight up, i should wake up
ok look, your white not like how NWA look
an in they book your still a skinny caucasion f**k
and its amazin luck ya head has stayed stuck
it sucks iv had enough, as if that wasnt bad enough my dad has had enough
kikd me out to see wat it was like to have it rough
i dont like this type of stuff
im a powerful foe, half an hour ago i planted flowers to grow
with miracle grow, a line just to show you ma lyrical flow
killin u slow, clinically though
as individuals go your nuthin to me
im collectin mercury to unmercifully put in your tea
unluckily, u die suddenly rite in front of me
once again im runnin out of room
there's another out soon
downloadin my tune, in your room from iTuneWww@Enter-QA@Com
if u heckle an stare il put your neck in a snare
to battle me is what it's like to wrestle a bear
im a faker, an immitator straight up
cos i say straight up, i should wake up
ok look, your white not like how NWA look
an in they book your still a skinny caucasion f**k
and its amazin luck ya head has stayed stuck
it sucks iv had enough, as if that wasnt bad enough my dad has had enough
kikd me out to see wat it was like to have it rough
i dont like this type of stuff
im a powerful foe, half an hour ago i planted flowers to grow
with miracle grow, a line just to show you ma lyrical flow
killin u slow, clinically though
as individuals go your nuthin to me
im collectin mercury to unmercifully put in your tea
unluckily, u die suddenly rite in front of me
once again im runnin out of room
there's another out soon
downloadin my tune, in your room from iTuneWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
DUDE U GOT A GOOD FLOW
KEEP DOING IT
KEEP ON PRACTISING
U COULD CREATE A MYSPACE MUSIC PROFILE
AND UPLOAD YOUR MUSIC
THEN WE COULD JUDGE U BETTER
ANYWAY GOOD WORK
I WILL GIVE U A 4 OUT OF 10
BUT I CANNOT REALLY GIVE U A COMMENT WITHOUT LISTENING TO YOU!.
KEEP DOING YOUR THING
GOOD LUCKWww@Enter-QA@Com
KEEP DOING IT
KEEP ON PRACTISING
U COULD CREATE A MYSPACE MUSIC PROFILE
AND UPLOAD YOUR MUSIC
THEN WE COULD JUDGE U BETTER
ANYWAY GOOD WORK
I WILL GIVE U A 4 OUT OF 10
BUT I CANNOT REALLY GIVE U A COMMENT WITHOUT LISTENING TO YOU!.
KEEP DOING YOUR THING
GOOD LUCKWww@Enter-QA@Com
you improved from the last 1 it has a flow in it but the expression is still bad
its like your writing them in 15 minutes songs are things your supposed work on edit at least two days at the quickest it should take to write a song
overall 4/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
its like your writing them in 15 minutes songs are things your supposed work on edit at least two days at the quickest it should take to write a song
overall 4/10Www@Enter-QA@Com
Thought i would see if you'd got better within a matter of minuites!. To find out i couldn't make it to the end because it had sent me to sleep!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
u aiight, u aiight!Www@Enter-QA@Com
hatin whites and killing people
not my sort of crap
u got tallent just don't hate the world on the track
and think that every white dude just wanna be black oooohhhhh skillllzzzzzz! LOLWww@Enter-QA@Com
not my sort of crap
u got tallent just don't hate the world on the track
and think that every white dude just wanna be black oooohhhhh skillllzzzzzz! LOLWww@Enter-QA@Com
it was pretty goodWww@Enter-QA@Com
i didnt like it!Www@Enter-QA@Com