So this is a song i wrote and im not putting the whole thing on here but what do!
Question: So this is a song i wrote and im not putting the whole thing on here but what do you think!?
I wrote this song about my friend but I'm not posting the whole thing! Tell me what you think!
She's laying on her bed
Wondering why things never go her way
A million thoughts run through her head
But none of them are that it'll be okay
So who's this girl
That the world
Has left so hopeless
She's so beautiful
She's so young
To be that depressed
And I'll fight for her
And I'll die for her
'Cause she deserves another chance
She is the only one
I've ever met
That understands who I am
She says step back for a minute
Things are clearer when you're not in it
You can see how its going downhill
And she tries not to get emotional
But it hurts her and it hurts me
To have to stay and watch her agony
So who's this girl
That the world
Has left so hopeless
She's so beautiful
She's so young
To be that depressed
And I'll fight for her
And I'll die for her
'Cause she deserves another chance
She is the only one
I've ever met
That understands who I am
!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
She's laying on her bed
Wondering why things never go her way
A million thoughts run through her head
But none of them are that it'll be okay
So who's this girl
That the world
Has left so hopeless
She's so beautiful
She's so young
To be that depressed
And I'll fight for her
And I'll die for her
'Cause she deserves another chance
She is the only one
I've ever met
That understands who I am
She says step back for a minute
Things are clearer when you're not in it
You can see how its going downhill
And she tries not to get emotional
But it hurts her and it hurts me
To have to stay and watch her agony
So who's this girl
That the world
Has left so hopeless
She's so beautiful
She's so young
To be that depressed
And I'll fight for her
And I'll die for her
'Cause she deserves another chance
She is the only one
I've ever met
That understands who I am
!.!.!.!.Www@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
it sounds really good!. if i were you though i would expand on the topic more!. its hard to know really what the song is really about!. it sounds kinda like a blink182 kinda thing haha keep up the creativity:)Www@Enter-QA@Com
kinda a depressing song but ur expressing ur feeling and its a really good song!. I wish i could hear the music to go with it!Www@Enter-QA@Com
it's okay, i love to write
songs i can make it way better than what u did
so how bout it
will u let me!?
if u don't i understand
by demi lovatoWww@Enter-QA@Com
songs i can make it way better than what u did
so how bout it
will u let me!?
if u don't i understand
by demi lovatoWww@Enter-QA@Com
It's great!. It's a bit long to be commercial!.
It has no copyright or you'd list the name of your songwriting company and what publishing company owns it!.
Dodge
Laughing Dolphin MusicWww@Enter-QA@Com
It has no copyright or you'd list the name of your songwriting company and what publishing company owns it!.
Dodge
Laughing Dolphin MusicWww@Enter-QA@Com