My lyrics?!
Question: My lyrics!?
Now I'm having second thoughts about this!.!.!.!. If you have to tell me I suck, then uhh!.!.!.!. do it!. I don't really know which verse should be the chorus, or which sections should be a verse, I can't decide, so I didn't label anything!. I thought of this as a slower, maybe darker song!.!.!.!.!. So here!.
(Untitled)
Sometimes I think about the strangest things
And I wonder, what they'll get me
Sometimes I hear the oddest noises
And I wonder, If I'd see anything
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
I don't want to bring back these memories
But I wonder, should I just try!?
One more time, surely it couldn't hurt
One more time, instead of wondering why
One more time
Sometimes I worry about the strangest things
And I wonder, who will catch them!?
Who will catch your eyes!? Please don't let them
Because after all of this, I still want themWww@Enter-QA@Com
(Untitled)
Sometimes I think about the strangest things
And I wonder, what they'll get me
Sometimes I hear the oddest noises
And I wonder, If I'd see anything
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
I don't want to bring back these memories
But I wonder, should I just try!?
One more time, surely it couldn't hurt
One more time, instead of wondering why
One more time
Sometimes I worry about the strangest things
And I wonder, who will catch them!?
Who will catch your eyes!? Please don't let them
Because after all of this, I still want themWww@Enter-QA@Com
Answers:
ok not sure why you deleted the other question cuz i was answersing it when you deleted it but here is my answer:
ok ive never heard of tim johnston either lol!.
well first i wanted to say that these lyrics are pretty good!.
ok so lets label your sections 1, 2, 3, and 4, in order going down the page (so 1 starts with sometimes i think, 2 begins with because, 3 begins with I dont, and 4 is sometimes i worry!.)
i definately thing that 1 and 4 are verses!.!.!.they just have the feel to them that they are telling most of the story and they are in the same format!.
there is no doubt in my mind that 2 should be the chorus--they way it rhymes (although the rhyming could use a little work) and they way it is set up!.
lastly, section 3 is set up in the same format as the verses but it has a whole different feel to it so i think it would make a very nice bridge!. so here is the way i would set up your song:
verse one:
Sometimes I think about the strangest things
And I wonder, what they'll get me
Sometimes I hear the oddest noises
And I wonder, If I'd see anything
chorus:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
verse two:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
chorus:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
bridge:
I don't want to bring back these memories
But I wonder, should I just try!?
One more time, surely it couldn't hurt
One more time, instead of wondering why
One more time
chorus:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
this is a pretty awesome song--nice work! it could use a little revision tho!.!.!.like making each section have an established rhyming patternWww@Enter-QA@Com
ok ive never heard of tim johnston either lol!.
well first i wanted to say that these lyrics are pretty good!.
ok so lets label your sections 1, 2, 3, and 4, in order going down the page (so 1 starts with sometimes i think, 2 begins with because, 3 begins with I dont, and 4 is sometimes i worry!.)
i definately thing that 1 and 4 are verses!.!.!.they just have the feel to them that they are telling most of the story and they are in the same format!.
there is no doubt in my mind that 2 should be the chorus--they way it rhymes (although the rhyming could use a little work) and they way it is set up!.
lastly, section 3 is set up in the same format as the verses but it has a whole different feel to it so i think it would make a very nice bridge!. so here is the way i would set up your song:
verse one:
Sometimes I think about the strangest things
And I wonder, what they'll get me
Sometimes I hear the oddest noises
And I wonder, If I'd see anything
chorus:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
verse two:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
chorus:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
bridge:
I don't want to bring back these memories
But I wonder, should I just try!?
One more time, surely it couldn't hurt
One more time, instead of wondering why
One more time
chorus:
Because I have no rights
And I have no fight
So I wonder
How far away I am
And exactly why I don't understand
Is there somethin' I should do!?
Do I need a master plan!?
this is a pretty awesome song--nice work! it could use a little revision tho!.!.!.like making each section have an established rhyming patternWww@Enter-QA@Com
You stole this from the Tim Johnston song "one more time"!.
It's the same lyrics word for word!.
You didn't think anyone would notice!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
It's the same lyrics word for word!.
You didn't think anyone would notice!?Www@Enter-QA@Com
This is a Tim Johnston song!. He's an old country singer from like the 60's!.
BUSTED!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
BUSTED!!!!!Www@Enter-QA@Com
neat :)Www@Enter-QA@Com